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Introductory Paragraph Analysis

Decent Essays

Introductory Paragraph
Introduce your claim by writing a clear thesis statement about which site you support:

Attention grabbing lead: OMG, OMG, OMG. My parents just found out about that picture that I wasn't supposed to upload. Omg I don't trust them anymore.

Thesis statement: Parents should not monitor their child's digital lives. First of all, if a parent is found “snooping” on their child it can break a necessary trust, If I found someone watching my every move online, I would start to distrust them and maybe feel distrusted. That trust is important because it will cause the child to not want to be with their guardian.
Jen Nessel a mother and researcher says that most of the parents that are monitoring their child's social

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