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Is The Correct Term Down's Syndrome (Or Correct)?

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Reviewer 1: 1. Nice patient treatment and a relatively good manuscript but it needs (in my opinion) many minor wording changes; examples: (abstract) "who had" instead of "who has", (3rd paragraph of introduction) "mild to moderate" instead of "mild or moderate", (page 3 line 15) use "there are only a few ...", (in dental history section use the past tense of verbs instead of the present and some sentences could be combined to shorten the manuscript and improve readability. Respond: I gree and the above mention comments were considered Text change: text was modified accordingly. 2. Is the correct term Down Syndrome or Down's Syndrome (or are both correct)? Response: according to the National Down Syndrome Society prefers using Down Syndrome instead of Down’s Syndrome. They states in their main website that ” Down syndrome is named for the English physician John Langdon Down, who characterized the condition, but did not have it. An "apostrophe s" connotes ownership or possession”. For this reason, we used this term. http://www.ndss.org/Down-Syndrome/Preferred-Language-Guide/ Text change: No text changes 3. Page 5 line 53 - use the term "study …show more content…

How did you make the custom locator? Was it placed at the same tilt as the path of insertion of the RDP? If not what concerns can you have with restorations of this type? What alloy was used? Response: The custom locator was fabricated in conjunction with UCLA type of abutment and was casted in type IV gold alloy. The custom locator was first attached to the UCLA with onlay wax and was aligned with the same path of the insertion of the IAORDP and then invested and casted with type IV gold alloy. If we did not align the custom locator with the same path, the insertion of the IAORDP would be difficult and that would accelerate the wear of the plastic insert of the locator attachment. The text was modified and more explanations were added. Text change: more explanation was

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