Jarmain Harrell North Acadian Analysis

There are several aspects of my essay that are strong. First, I believe that my topic sentences were representative of the topics I detailed in my essay. For example, I stated that, “In Florence Kelley’s speech, child labor is portrayed as a difficult, evil task.” In doing so, I was able to describe Kelley’s central argument, which I returned through during the remainder of my essay. Secondly, I successfully chose effective rhetorical strategies to support my argument.

Overall, the essay seemed to lack flow as a result of a noticeable absence of transition words. The essay had bad syntax. Each paragraph seemed to be scenario after scenario and each sentence seemed to be idea after idea. For example, in the first paragraph, the list consisted of multiple sentences, instead of just one sentence with commas. “But they are few: Being mistaken for a wheat field by a cloud of locusts. Being buried alive”...“Interviews from film festivals.”, this seemed like an awful way to list ideas. In addition, the fourth paragraph of the essay was made up of only 2 sentences, one

Though one cannot yet tell if Walton’s mission will benefit himself or society, he seems to think that it will. Obviously, he has a passion for his exploration of the north that shines through in some of the other letters he writes to his sister as well as this particular quote. He has already worked towards his goal and continues to, it seems, based on how he describes himself early on in the letters. If his mission to the north is successful, his discoveries there may be good for mankind if he finds something interesting or even useful. Additionally, Walton shows that he is different than other people because of his desire to explore, as that desire “hurries me out of the common pathways of men”, which might award him a normal life but not

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In your essay, be sure to do the following. Choose relevant evidence, including key details and quotations from the excerpt, to support your analysis. Your writing will be scored based on the development of ideas, organization of writing, and language conventions of grammar, usage, and mechanics. Please write your response within the lined boxes on the following pages. Cooper Wilkinson English II Mrs. Wooley 25 April 2024

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My vocabulary was also relatively good, though it could have been better. I am especially proud of the use of the word ‘mundane’. The my organization was deliberate, there were only two body paragraphs instead of three, and my organization was designed around my incorrect claim. My writing was fluid, but not as fluid as it could have been. A variance in sentence starters would have greatly helped the fluidity of this essay. My voice is present throughout the essay, but it does not resonate confidence. I gave myself a 2 because my “ideas are presented with little clarity, organization, or support from the passage.” The passage was not meant to support my claim about the usage of conflict and characterization, and thus my ideas cannot be supported by the passage. Also, my analysis was “partial, unconvincing, or irrelevant,” as my analysis reflected the irrelevant claim. I did “ignore how Lawrence employs literary devices,” since there is no mention of any literary device in my essay. However, I did not give myself a 1 because I do feel like there was a partially “coherent discussion of the passage,” something a 1 would not

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Since the beginning of this semester, English 101 has helped me realize both my strengths and weaknesses as a writer. One weakness that I have realized about myself is my tendency to not fully plan out my essays before I start writing the rough drafts. This is one thing that English 101 has helped me to improve, by creating well-planned out outlines before starting to write. A strength that I have is writing strong commentary that supports the provided quote and shows why the quote is relevant to the essay’s overall thesis.

In this essay, my goal was to create a well written and formatted Critical Analysis essay where I would introduce an argument and use evidence to support my position. I also had to include a counterclaim in order to argue anything that went against my position on the topic, as well as viewing the effectiveness of using strong sources that would support my writing. The only reason I was motivated to write this essay was because it was mandatory for my FIQWS class. I hope to accomplish an essay where I include a clear argument and is well supported by my evidence; and hopefully connect back with my thesis

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