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Journal Entry Four Reflection

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The entries I chose to reflect upon are journal entries three and four. Both entries dealt with the second writing prompt, which allowed the students to address the representation of White privilege in the media and raise awareness about its effect on a specific case. Additionally, both gave precise details about my writing process when constructing the Taylor Swift essay. What I am proud of is that these two entries were flip sides of the same argumentative coin. Additionally, these showcased my ability to use my distinct style in exact opposite conditions, by beginning with one point of view and ending with the entire paper’s focus ending in the converse.
In journal entry three displayed a great acquisition of skill: consistently maintaining …show more content…

As I expressed in my journal, “I turned the paper completely around and used my old paper as counterarguments and wrote my new paper for hours without breaks.” From long nights working on one argument I realised that my argument was not strong enough to support my thesis and therefore thought it would be best to change the paper completely to satisfy my need to give the other side of the argument credit. I ended up using the entire first paper a strong base for my counterarguments in my second paper and it proved successful. In this, I continued my style of referencing but displayed versatility in my writing skills because I was able to manipulate the evidence in different ways to support my new argument. For example, with David Wise’s argument of Caucasians constantly needing to “guard their White privilege,” instead of agreeing with the evidence I was able to disprove it by writing in my essay, “Wise’s argument merely displays the hypersensitivity and over political correctness Caucasians are forced to keep in mind nowadays.” Afterwards, not only did I continually refer back to that over sensitivity, but I also maintained my style when discussing the opposing

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