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LIFE AND LEGEND Play Essay

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LIFE AND LEGEND is a sports drama. The plot is driven by solid themes about redemption and second chances. The plot is clear and the stakes feel personal. The tone is consistently dramatic. The story offers likable characters and the protagonist, Daryl, is very easy to root for.

However, with that said, the plot is a very familiar plot of a hopeful ball player getting a second chance. While it’s a tried and true formula, it would benefit the script to try and find a way to make the story feel more original and refreshing.
For example, instead of giving his brother, Kyle, an illness, maybe give Daryl a history of seizures or an illness that impacts his game.

The other concern about the presentation is the structure and the pace. The …show more content…

Certainly, the idea is good and the idea that Daryl has to make a tough decision to stay in the game or walk away has strong merit, but the series of events just need to be more convincing.

Also, because of the structure and slow pace, there’s not enough compelling tension to sustain the entire plot. The structure needs stronger pivotal plot beats to keep the story moving forward. Maybe Daryl does consider Shannon’s offer, but at the last minute changes his mind or maybe he does do something illegal and is almost caught or is caught. Maybe he gets probation and can’t leave town, but he does for the game and this is when social services comes in and/or probation because he has violated an order.

Moving up the idea of him joining the team is also a consideration. Show him and the team working hard to make it to the championship game, as they overcome obstacles along the way. This naturally builds anticipation to the championship game vs. just having Daryl play in the final game. This would give the opportunity to develop the rival more and this too would create more tension. These are just examples (and ideas) of ways to elevate the tension and to intensify the tension, as the structure

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