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Life On Mars By Pablo Nersa Analysis

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Tracy K Smith & Pablo Neruda Tracy K. Smith’s Life on Mars, takes bits and pieces of inspirations from other artists works. An example of this can be seen in a poem from part four of Life on Mars, in which Smith makes use of Pablo Neruda's poem “Tonight I can write the saddest lines.” Neruda has been referred to as the greatest poet of the 20th century, so it is only fitting that Smith uses his work as an inspiration. She uses direct quotation from his poem. Although they both similarly use simple language to make the poems more understandable, their use of tone, tense, setting and theme are contrasting. These four elements are used contrastingly to show the difference in the emotions of the subjects.
Neruda's language throughout the poem is concise and to the point. The poem contains no rhyme or rhythm but is instead written simply, in free verse, easily understandable by any reader. The use of simple language hints at the sincerity in the poet's words. Smith’s short poem in part four of Life on Mars, addressed to S from J also uses simple and concise language. It is a very short poem in comparison to Neruda's poem. This perhaps hints to the amount of emotional investment that each subject has. Neruda's poem is much longer showing that his subject is highly emotionally invested as opposed to Smith's subject whose simple emotions are projected through a short poem.
In comparison to the simple language that both poets similarly use, the use of tone is used to show the difference in emotions. Neruda's poem is about a lost love. The tone of the poem is love struck and melancholic. It shows feelings of sadness and bitterness towards the lost lover. Smith's poem on the other hand shows her subject as being in a new place and going on adventures. Her poem has a tone of hope and excitement for the future. Hope for the discovery of oneself and perhaps even a new lover.
Similar to the use of tone, the tense of the poem is also used to show the difference in the emotions of the subjects. Throughout his poem Neruda continuously switches between the past and present tense to emphasize his shift in and out of reality due to his immense despair. He switches between “I loved her” to “sometimes I love her” in his poem.

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