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My novel, Look Behind You, is written from a “3rd-Person Limited” perspective from the view of Kendra Michaels, a therapist with has enhanced smell and hearing due to the fact that she was once blind, before taking experimental surgery and regaining her sight. In a nutshell, a serial killer in San Diego, named Zachary, leaves behind “souvenirs” of past, unsolved murders at his crime scenes. When the SDPD catches wind of this, they put together a team of the best FBI profilers-a “dream team”-in order to catch a man whom they believe to be America’s most dangerous murderer. An intelligence agent named Lynch, who has a liking towards Kendra, decides to join the commotion, and together Kendra and Lynch predict the killer’s next victim. Although they don’t manage to save the victim’s life, they do manage to kill the murderer-a FBI agent named Gina …show more content…

The story ends with a casual conversation between Kendra and Lynch in the hospital.
After finishing my novel, I pondered about why we learn more about Kendra when Gina attempted to kill Ryan, one of Kendra’s clients, yet the plot is smoothly transitioned when Hagstrom, the final victim, was brutally murdered. In The Incredibles, Jack-Jack Parr is kidnapped and we learn more about the family, yet Syndrome destroys the city and the plot is advanced. Some similarities that I noticed are that both Jack-Jack and Ryan have a personal relationship with the protagonists, and the citizens and Hagstrom are insignificant, so you don’t really care about what happens to them. Through this, I learnt that putting characters that have a personal relationship with the protagonist into problems that the protagonist has to solve, allows us to develop the character, while using insignificant characters for the same job develops the plot better. A big issue with the story was not being able to justify Hagstrom unknowingly being used as bait to catch the murderer.After watching a Youtube video

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