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Lynnette: A Narrative Fiction

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“Lynnette!” I screamed, tearing through the eerie silence that lay like dust upon the furniture covered in sheets. Running up the stairs, I tripped, falling on the hardwood floor, hair stuck to my head with perspiration. I lay there, slowly losing consciousness, when something flashed across my mind: Maybe she’d been right all along! “The paintings are quite different,” Lynnette said, eyeing them suspiciously. “Either this person is a fantastic painter or he trapped these people inside the canvas.” She forced a laugh, but clearly the paintings unsettled her. “H-he’s going to come back. He wants to be remembered!” Lynnette anxiously stammered, shaking me awake at midnight. “What’s the matter?” I asked, seeing her terror-stricken face. “The painter who m-made all these p-paintings, he’s coming back . . . lock us forever. . . . W-we should leave.” Lynnette was shaking me, pulling on me, doing every possible thing to get me off the bed. …show more content…

I gently whispered, “It’s just a nightmare. Everything’s all right because no one can take you as long as I’m here.” She shivered beside me throughout the long, starless night. I woke up and started walking into the bedroom but stopped in my tracks. On the wall in front of me was a painting of Lynnette. Same fiery red hair, rosy cheeks, and yellow cardigan, the way I’d seen her last, other than the closed eyes full of tears, which were new. I walked towards it in horror. This painting had never been here before. Turning around, I saw the door slam! I cautiously walked backwards, afraid but determined, thinking my back would touch the painting. I felt a tickle down my spine and saw black paint wrap around my waist, hard, pulling me in. Kneeling on the floor, I looked up into the face of Lynnette when an old man came between us with a hysterical laugh. “A complete painting!” He looked towards me greedily as I struggled against my restraints, and then, suddenly, walked off into the

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