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Mary Zeigler How To Catch River Crabs Essay

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"How to Catch River Crabs" by Mary Zeigler was a short, but good process essay. This passage was very clear to me, it was a detailed, easy read passage. The writer, Mary Zeigler, provided list of things needed in order to catch river crabs. For example she listed scoops, crab lines, a sturdy crate, bait, and of course a boat. To me I feel she said everything that was needed in order to start this task. I think that the part where she was listing everything you that is necessary to have needs to have a bit more detail. I think Mary should have explained what some of the items are and how they are used. For an example, she listed "scoops", I have no idea what scoops are or how they are used. The instructions that start of by "dropping the line" I think may be hard for a beginner to follow. Mary did well explaining it, but …show more content…

The order of process directions are chronological from beginning to end. Mary Zeigler did a nice job with organizing her paragraphs. I liked how Mary broke each step down and discussed them separately in each body paragraph. Overall this essay was written very well! I did not find any grammatical errors, nor did I have any grammatical concerns. The writer’s usage of transitional phrases were great, as well!

"Kool-Aid, Oh Yeah!" sample essay's purpose was very clear. It was a step by step on how to make Kool-Aid. I do not have any suggestions for the writer as to making the passage more clear, because I do not think there is a need for that. The writer did include a list of materials needed to make Kool-Aid. There is not many you need, but the writer explained for each material what it was and how it is used. To be

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