Mt. Elbert Narrative

I`m just an average 17-year-old girl named Violet Rivers walking home from hanging out with some friends on a Friday night but I had this strange feeling that I was being followed, I started to walk faster but then I heard a noise from behind the bushes. As the curious girl I am I decided to see what the noise was when I looked behind the bushes there was nothing there but all of a sudden everything went black.When I woke up the back of my head was killing me and I was in a dim room lit by a couple of candles with a weird smell and I was in a hospital bed with a small dresser next to it. I got out of the bed feeling a little dizzy, slowly walking to the door, when I opened it the hallway was so dark and cold so I grabbed a candle then cautiously moved at a slow pace down the hall feeling scared. There was a royal blue, old looking door that stood out from the rest of the old wooden doors, on the right side of the hallway towards the end, it was hard to open but I pushed as much as I could, then it swung open with the sound of squeaking hinges. There was a twirling staircase that leads far down, I followed curiously to see what was at the bottom. When I got

I wanted to go home, i was scared and lost in the woods with a 15 year old stoner. I pushed him out of the way and kept walking. He laughed and continued walking behind me. I walked faster than him anyway. I noticed we were starting to walk at an incline. Shouldn't we be at the main road by now? These woods went through the center of town they were about 2 miles long and 1 mile wide. We entered at the end of the woods and walked about half a mile deep. Even if we went to the 2 mile part we should be out by now. Something was up and i didn't know what to do. I turned around to ask ethan another

I woke up in hot sweat, well, not a hot sweat exactly, but it felt like my body was melting and my head felt quite foggy. I didn't really pay attention to much that was different about my surroundings until I heard a faint, yet gentle voice approach me from across the hall. It sounded like Phoebe but different. The voice sounded older and less pure, so it couldn't be Phoebe. Everything just felt different. I noticed the clothes I was wearing were drab. If I was at Pencey I would be shamed by the entire class for showing up in these clothes. Making the connection I realised I was in quite a small room with not much to it. There was a desk which held a mountain of papers. There was an old rickety chair, and a small dresser. Other than that

It was very late and everyone was asleep, I lay on a cot in the middle of a room surrounded by lots of other cots with many other girls like me sleeping on them. I left the room, against rules, but that was the least of my problems. Instead of seeing the old stained wooden hallway in front of me I saw grass...long tall green grass and a few trees in the distance. I looked around me and to my surprise I must have only been a few inches tall. I looked up but instead of seeing my white ceiling I saw a gray sky. I was so confused and scared, I turned around to run straight back into my room, but there was only grass and trees behind me to. The door was gone there were no walls, I was not in Miss. Bridget's Home for Girls in New Jersey. I stood still for a moment pinching my self seeing if I was dreaming, but even if it was a dream it was not working. I stared walking slowly, everything was quiet, no animals, no people for that matter, nothing except for the

It was a nice July day, I had been working all morning and I was needing to cool off. So I head over to a friends house in Laurium, I picked up Garrett and we went to another friends house in Calumet to let them follow us in his white minivan. I was driving a big maroon colored Ford E-350. We decided to go out towards Bootjack because we had to pick up another person from out there anyways. On the way out towards Bootjack, Garrett told me, “you know what’s weird? My mom told me before we left to be careful. She must think something bad is going to happen.” I was a little weirded out by this, but I was determined to have a good day. We found an empty camp site and went swimming in the lake. After we finished swimming we continued on our little day trip. We picked up Claire in bootjack, and wanted to head over to the other side of the Peninsula. So we drove down to McLain State Park and went on the break wall. We sat there for a good chunk of time. The time is 8:30.

It was 2:30 school just got out me and Tayler where going to leave as I realis I forgot my book in the classroom so we ran back to the classroom and when we got there was a mysterious door in the back of the classroom. There were no teachers in site so I decided to go over to the door and open it. There was a very bright light coming from the door. Tayler and I took one step in the door and then it slam shut behind us. We took a few more step closer to the light. But now we were in some other town named Brownard County, Florida. I saw the sign that said the name of the town.

I woke up and rustled all my things together and jetted down stairs. I see my mom across the room eating her favorite cereal, Lucky Charms. I slugged around the kitchen still half-awake trying to find a bowl, cereal, and milk. Then I heard a whistle and realized she had my breakfast ready on the table. I sat across from her on the table. The scent of perfume hit my nose, it smelled fruity. Her hair was combed back into a sleek bun. She was wearing a formal white shirt and a black skirt and some heels. I slurped the last of the milk as she was almost out the door. I walked outside and ran to the car. I opened the door and got inside. It was 7:59 am.

I woke up later when I heard some rattling at the door handle. Panicked, I call out “Ethan, is that you?” As soon as I said that, the rattling stopped and I could hear footsteps in the hallway as the front door slammed open. But there wasn’t anybody there. I screamed as loud as I could and not even two minutes later Ethan was running inside to find me. “What’s wrong?!” He asked looking terrified. “Nothing, just a bad dream I guess.” I said with tears streaming down my cheeks. “That doesn’t explain why the door was open.” He said sternly. I insisted he should go home and he gave me his phone number in case I needed anything. I tried as hard as I could to stay awake, but eventually I succumbed to my

While we were on our jog we went by a house that was not there before.It was this really creepy mansion,it was like it came from out of nowhere.Trevor is the one thats is into all the spooky stuff.The rest of us are not but he want to check it out,and we are not going to let him go alone.It was not an ordinary house.Everything when we went in there seemed to stop.When we left to go home and get

The morning was cold cause the Furnace did not work which probably the reason the houses pay requirement was so low to buy. I got but of course my parents were gone to work already so I though maybe to Facebook my friends in Florida but my father did not know how to start the wifi so i proceeded into the basement to hook the network up. As i slowly stepped down the steep old stairs i began to see an array of board games very amused I tried to grab one but then a very dark feeling came over me and I felt way too sick to move. I lie there on the floor crying praying for the moment to end. Just then I awoke in the car with all of the luggage on our way the our cozy new yorkers

I tried to remember what had happened but I just couldn't wrap my head around it. I struggled to my feet and i looked around and saw nothing but black walls and a door. I walked up to the door and tried to open it and it shocked me. There was nothing around me to try to hold to get the door open. So i stood there wondering if I should try again and I did. This time it actually worked it didn't shock me it just. I walked outside and and saw children running around playing. As i stood there the people around me stood there like nothing happened like there wasn't a women standing there like nothing was wrong. I stood there for a couple seconds thinking what led me into this place. As i stood there all the little kids went past me and they were all playing like i was invisible. The weird thing is that all the kids looked like katherine. I thought that was very strange. So i started down the street and all the homes looked the same,cars,clothes,and the way people lived each child had there own home. But the weird thing is that when the children came out of there homes they would carry bottles with them. Finally I got to this little shop called “Little womens

We walked the other way, when we got to school me and Alyssa asked the group of kids if they left notes on the street telling us to find them the group of kids said “no”. The bell rang we went inside and sat down i was getting my book from my desk and there was a note that said “it is not who you think it is giving you these notes”. I gave it to the teacher in fear she said don't worry about it is probably someone messing with you. I sat down, the day goes by normally but Alyssa had to go home early and my brother had to go to football practice and i had to walk by myself, i was walking in fear i keep hearing noises, boom boom boom and they keeped getting louder each time so i ran home slammed the door closed, my mom asked if i was ok i said i was fine i started to calm

Over the summer I felt something weird it was like a strong force and each time I walked it either got stronger or it got weaker, knowing something was up I walked towards the way that it got stronger from and the force stopped once I got to an abandoned building. Remembering the building I walked inside it and found Amber I was shocked to find her so I walked up to her, she saw me and startled she she jumped back,saw it was me and ran to hug me,all of a sudden I found myself in my room layign on my bed.It was all a dream! I am still in 7th grade. I haven’t started high school yet and that had never happened.

I explained in a rush to my friend as we were driving,to this house I kept seeing in my dreams,it’s been haunting me ever since I turned fifteen. But I don’t know why. “Nice scary story Danny,but I still don’t believe you.” I rolled my eyes and looked out the window smacking my lips in the process “How many variations do you need Maria.” She snickered,she knew I was a little frustrated about this situation,she always would refer to the person in my dreams as ‘The Trapped Ghost’ sometimes I’d laugh at it,sometimes I’d get mad at it but know I really need answers.

The narrow road through the quiet neighborhood is paved and devoid of cars. Walking alone, I have a sense that I am going somewhere though my destination is both unknown and seemingly irrelevant. The neighborhood, filled with houses, suggests many people must live there, but I see no evidence of anyone. Surprisingly, this doesn't bother me nor seem the slightest bit odd. Moving through the neghborhood I glance over to my right and notice a row of houses. Robotically, I leave the roadway, making my way over to an unassuming house on the corner. As in the other versions of this recurring dream, I am not entirely comfortable with what I am about to do, but I feel compelled, seemingly unable to do anything else. Neither the neighborhood nor the house is familiar to me as I approach the front door. Half hoping my entrance will be thwarted by a locked door, I reach for the doorknob rather than knocking. Grasping, I feel the cold metal under my fingers as my grip tightens. As is always the case, the doorknob gives under the pressure of my twisting hand. The door creaks as I slowly push it open before stepping inside. Looking around, I take in the room's emptiness and breathe a sigh of relief as I scan for my exit point.