My Thesis Statement

ESSAY Jack London’s novel the Call Of The Wild is a story of resilience and strength, to overcome the problems faced you need to have these traits. The text follows Buck, a large St Bernard cross Scotch Shepherd dog, as his skills are constantly tested throughout this novella. The text shows the reader the importance of gaining resilience and strength throughout ones short lifetime. This is gained by Jack London’s explicit detail of buck’s character with the use of short sentences and rhetorical questions.

The main reason why I chose to revise this essay was because it was one of my lowest essay grades, so I knew I could find my mistakes and make this essay stronger. Furthermore, after I looked at the feedback that was given to me, I realized I could fix the errors that affected my grade. The major improvements I made in this essay was making my introduction more clear by making it easier to understand what my topic was about and relatable. I also made changes to my conclusion because I did not think it summarized my body paragraphs and was not developed enough. Lastly, the minor changes I made in this essay was providing examples to support the points that I made and to make them

1.State in your own words the writer's thesis statement. What is the problem they are arguing and what is the solution they propose?  If you have difficulty putting the thesis in your own words, state so and explain why. The thesis of this essay is about the young generation, young people with no vision, who don’t have any models to guide their lives and therefore they choose illegal ways to build their future, ending up by loosing their lives.

In middle school, there are many things to learn. From ordinary multiplication problems, to biological anatomy, there's an amazingly diverse amount of subjects students can learn in main school courses. However, there should also be many electives and after school activities to participate in. At Scotts Valley Middle School, there are three seventh grade electives for each trimester. Each one is unique, providing different opportunities for students, including Directed Studies, where you can work on homework and school projects early, Spanish, where you learn Spanish language skills from Mr. Sampson, and Health class, where Mr. Allen teaches things about the human body.

The purpose of this brief is to provide you with an overview of how the Catholic Church view women being ordained in the church. The views are based on the traditional and doctrinal references that the Catholic religion is based on. The views are from various resources such as the Roman Catholic Church in the Vatican, Pope John Paul II, and the newly elected Pope Benedict XVI. The views described in this brief are based on the traditions of old and their refusal to change the traditions to fit for the twentieth century.

Writing the proposal paper was the longest paper that we as a class had written. Our main goal was to write a proposal argument based on the issue that was picked by the students and address the causes or the effects of in your Causal Argument. This paper was fifteen hundred to eighteen hundred words, with a little over a month to complete it. The controversial topic that came to my head that has been talked about for years now; why college athletes should be paid. With this tedious and prolonged essay, I was able to receive personal, but constructive criticism. My essay was supposed to persuade others to take action on a controversial topic. Due to the abundant amount of smaller deadlines, I was more focused on writing a well-developed paper. After each deadline I was able to get back my mistakes and correct them. Throughout the year the same mistakes held present in my essays.

The thesis statement should appear very close to the beginning of the paper. Some professors want it in a specific place — often the last sentence of the first paragraph. That's as good a position as any, but I prefer not to be rigidly formulaic in such matters. In any case, though, the thesis statement should be very near the beginning (in the first paragraph or

It is invaluable to be able to capture the emotion and experiences of adventures and expeditions throughout the world.

In the beginning of my research I had trouble thinking of a topic, I brainstormed and jotted down topics that are of my interests and topics that are currently going on I then decided to choose my topic on free public college education. In the beginning of my search for articles on free college education, I had trouble looking for the right articles I mostly received results that were not related to free public college education and this frustrated me. I then tried to be as specific as possible when it came to the keywords I then used Boolean searching, this gave me more relatable sources on my topic. Boolean searching is what helped me the most when it came to looking for articles that are useful for my

In the process of submitting my essay for review, I requested that the writing specialist focused on my thesis statement, grammar, and mechanics. When writing academic papers and discussion responses, I often struggle with clarity, sentence structure, and punctuation, which result in lower assignment grades. Therefore, to ensure that I clearly communicate my argument and facts in my final paper, I felt that it was necessary to have these two areas reviewed. Regarding my thesis statement, I wanted to ensure that my position, supporting reasons, and implications were combined, effectively.

A thesis statement is a sentence that explains the position that someone has about a certain topic. A thesis statement is not facts, but i specific opinion that someone has about a certain topic. It is a response to a question that their paper is centered around. It gives the reader a clue to what the paper is going to be about. It must stick to one topic and one position.

Teachers should assign less homework to allow students more time to sleep, to engage in more physical activity, and spend more quality time with their families.

The first paper that I wrote for this class showed where I was at in my writing abilities leaving high school and entering college. I feel as though my first paper could have been improved in how I constructed my sentences and used specific words. I knew my first paper needed revision because I have grown stylistically as a writer and have found my own voice, since the first paper was turned in. Due to me growing stylistically, I decided to go back and read over the comments made by Professor Olsen and also revise areas that I thought were geared more towards high school writing. Within my first paragraph, I included a transition from the introductory and background information to the thesis of the paper. I felt this was necessary because a skill that I lacked before completing this course was how to intertwine one topic with another, making the paragraphs flow together. Now that the introduction flows together, readers are able to understand how one topic relates to the other, making it a stronger paragraph. I also focused on my conclusion, specifically my concluding sentence. One of the main comments that Professor Olsen made was the original concluding sentence was too much of a cliffhanger that might have led the audience in a different direction than what I was intending. To solve this issue, I revised the last sentence to be more concrete and definite. I provided the reader with factual evidence, while also including the findings of the study. While not leaving the

“All men are created equal”(Lee 274) cited by Thomas Jefferson, in the infamous 1776 Declaration of Independence. Throughout this paper, I will present facts that counter this claim,    in which candidly excluded African Americans and Jews during the 1930’s and 40’s. This assignment requires me to compare and contrast Harper Lee’s “To Kill A Mockingbird” and Elie Wiesel “Night” by selecting three themes. Throughout this essay, my themes are racism, inequality in the judicial system, and educational barriers thereby deprived non-whites during the 20th Century.

I knew that sooner or later I would have to show someone my essay so I asked my friend, Brianna, for help. She edited my essay and she pointed out the fact that I strayed too far from prompt and wrote too much about Damien. It was hard to take criticism on this topic since it was so personal to me. I knew that Brianna was trying to help me so, I took a look at the paper and I tried to cut out the thing that were unnecessary and write more about the actual prompt, but it was really hard. I began showing my essay to more of my friends and I got a lot of the same remarks from people saying that I wrote too much about Damien and not enough about the test. Before this paper, I never took people 's criticism when writing, but I began to realize that they were just trying to help me and that it was not personal. When I went home the next day I started my essay from scratch and changed the focus from Damien to the test. After this, I compared the essays and I still liked the first essay more, but realized what my friends were talking about the first paper had