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My Writing Journey

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From a young age, I have always been taught to understand the value of education and learning. Reading and writing have been emphasized to me as tools for success, that should always be constantly improved, for as long as I can remember.
Reading has always been a pass time I enjoyed doing, there was just something about the fact that endless stories could be created with a combination of words and phrases. Without a doubt, Reading expands one’s knowledge on endless topics as well as expands creativity through inspiration of the various works and forms or literature. Personally, as I grew older and more curious with reading I began exploring different genres to read. My causal reading went from basic non-fiction books to reading things like …show more content…

I was assigned to write a DSP critical essay explaining what it means to be a writer in college and how college writing would challenge me in new ways. In this essay I show my earliest attempts to integrate ideas of others in my writing. The ideas I incorporated into this critical essay where from two articles by Nancy Sommers. I incorporated direct quotes from Sommers’ articles and properly included in-text citations. Although, these quotes where integrated in my essay, some of them where ‘phantom quotes’. The concept was brought to my attention during a class workshop when we discussed the draft of my second critical essay. These ‘phantom quotes’ where just thrown into my DSP essay and the rough draft of my Critical Essay without much explanation, analysis, critic, nor development. The DSP Essay, as stated before, showed my earliest attempt of demonstrating my abilities to showcase GELO #4, It wasn’t until my revised critical essay, Discussion and Debate: Evaluation of How The New York Times Promotes Global Citizenship, where was able to demonstrate this ability effectively. In my Critical essay, I was able to effectively present evidence with a greater proficiency than that of my DSP Essay. The “Integrating Evidence” prewriting worksheet helped me understand how to improve incorporate the ideas of other into my essay more properly. In the final draft of my Critical Essay, I no longer just stated author’s claims and moved on, but it was now apparent that also included evidence that supported the author’s claim and analysis of the evidence I decided to integrate with my ideas. More specifically in the essay where I improved was in the section where I discuss Naomi Wolf’s views on deliberation at the end of the fourth paragraph, I stated, “‘Wolf explains in her book, “When Americans deliberate with one another, it changes

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