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My Writing Reflection

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I have been practicing on how to improve my writing over the past few weeks, which has taught me a great deal about writing. My teacher would like me to evaluate and explain my strengths and weaknesses in my own writing. This evaluation is in between my two essays. One on my own and another with my teacher's help. I have strengths and weakness in my introduction, body paragraphs ,and my conclusion.
The first paragraph is my introduction which I have strengths and weaknesses, but my weaknesses are greater . I do have trouble with introductions, So on the first paper I got a seven when it was graded a "Seven means I have something wrong with my introduction"(Cupp). I got a seven because I did not explain how the topic of "Shutdown Your Screen Week" came about. I corrected this mistake by explaining how I got to the topic of "Shutdown Your Screen Week". For instances, I wrote "Dear …show more content…

My strengths are that I restate the thesis in the conclusion, and no "new arguments"or facts are introduced in the conclusion.(Cupp).For example, I wrote in my second essay "As we continue to advance in technology we should think about events like "Shutdown Your Screen Week". Students' social life's would be better on and off the screen. We could improve brain development on campus instead of damaging it with electronics. And as a school we could end the lies of multitasking in any setting. These are the reasons why as a school we should participate in the national "Shutdown Your Screen Week". The "call the action" is a weaknesses of mine because I have trouble finding the right words to help it flow and make the reader want take a stand with their opinion, but I have gained the skills to write a call to action over the past few weeks (Cupp). I hold many strengths and weaknesses in my conclusion like restating the thesis and a call to

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