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My motivation narrative essay

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Jazmyne Turner
Lydia Gwyn
English 111 N4
February 12th, 2015
Dr. Crumpler motivated to change my career goal into becoming a biomedical technologist
Dr. Crumpler motivated me to change my career goal into becoming a biomedical technologist. It all started when was reading an article online for a black history story for a program at my church on someone famous from the past. So I decided to do some research about Dr. Rebecca Crumpler. I found an article about Dr. Crumpler. Although I could had have chosen other people but I chose Dr. Crumpler. However, she was an amazing woman that loved to help people. She changed the way I think about doctors. This strong and amazing woman was born as a free slave. She was taken and raised by her aunt …show more content…

My sister born without thymus and this disease is called DiGeroge syndrome. I also have another life experience that changed my mind was that seeing my cousin Tyshria dying slowly from HIV, it kills me knowing that there 's no cure. Also knowing that she will never be able to have kids is even worst.
When the black history program started at my church, I was able to tell everybody on what lessons I learned on achievements. I was even able to tell everyone on what I am determining to achieve something so special like she did. Like for instance, I want to become the first female African American to find a cure for HIV and change many people lives. I want to earn something like the Nobel Peace Prize. I learned and even give some excellent advice to give to the young ones. Also, after reading this story, I was able to live and work towards change in a time when under appreciation. I have been given a chance to take college courses online through my school. And I am blessed for that. She gave me an embodiment of courage

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