Narrative Essay About A Water Ride

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In this story I will be talking about the amazing water ride in Universal studios, Singapore. I still remember till this day, how many times I rode that ride. For last 7 years we have been going to a lot of amusement parks like 6 Flags, Disneyland, MGM Studio, Lego Land, Epcot Center,Etc. When me, my mom, my dad, and my sister jumped in the car, I was as ready as can be.

I was very excited when I read the map of Universal Studio. All of a sudden I became greedy and wanted to go to the Harry Potter ride, Transformer ride, Indiana jones ride, Star wars ride, etc. While we did all the rides, me and my Mom were doing some of the scary rides, while my dad and my sister were doing some kid rides. My whole family continues this for hours until we came to the last ride. Splash Mountain. I wish this wasn't the last ride. It looked so awesome and thrilling, I thought. Unfortunately I was correct. Anyways, when we reached the ride location, the waiting-time on the gate read 3 hours!!! Me and my Dad stared at other people go down, screaming, yelling, and getting wet on the HUGE slide. Me and my Dad were tempted to go on that stunning water ride. Weirdly many people were looking at me.
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This raft was huge and I was going down a mountain of water!!! Ready to go, I thought. I made it a point that I HAVE to be in the first seats. Me and my Dad rushed but still couldn't get to the first seat. But still, our goal was the first seat. We quickly ran to the manager of the ride and asked him for the first seats. Luckily the people in the first seats had a child who was too small to ride so we had been gifted the front seats. I was soooooo ready to go down huge slides. When we were slowly moving some people started booing. Then I heard some mumbling. I didn’t hear very much but I am pretty sure they said, “ This ride sucks. There was no point waiting so
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