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Narrative Essay Outline Format: An Example Of My Leadership Experience

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Min Kyaw Thu EWRT 1A – Tuesday Thursday 1000 – 1215 HRS Instructor: Professor Maryalice Bonilla Date: 04/25/17 THE NARRATIVE ESSAY OUTLINE FORMAT The Prompt: Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes, or contributed to group efforts over time. I. Introduction THESIS STATEMENT In the past two years, I was in the national service serving my country. Being a NCO propelled me into a position where I can inspire others to excel in what they do. OR Throughout my time in the army, becoming someone who I thought I could never become, made others realize that they could be better than who they could be. That someone was a better version of me. BP1 Topic sentence: …show more content…

BP1 Topic sentence: Being at peace with oneself means accepting your own flaws and embracing it. A. Throughout my entire life, my dad has always been comparing me to others. Better results, better schools, well, better in everything B. The moment I let him compare myself to others, I demeaned myself and was unable to recognize the unique about me. C. When you seek perfection, desiring to become different and special, you will always end up feeling disappointed, empty and unsatisfied — because you already deep down are the different and special being you are seeking to become. D. The more you don’t embrace your flaws and accept yourself just the way you are, the more you fuel your inner battle against yourself, causing your psyche to be in a continuous state of anguish. BP2 Topic sentence: Accepting my flaws was my first step, identifying which aspects can I improve on was my second. The inability to focus on the task at hand often leads to fall in productivity. A. You will never reach your destination if you stop and throw stones at every dog that barks – Winston

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