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September 17, 1974. It was a cool, crisp fall night when I boarded the S.S. Hato. It was such a well crafted sub... what a shame. Everything was running smoothly, it should have been for I was the captain. We quickly submerged into the crystal clear waters of the Caribbean, I awaited to study the destinies of the Atlantic Ocean. As I waited one of my highest ranked crew members asked me a peculiar question, “Have you recently checked the radar?” I replied “James, why would I need to check the radar? We’ve just begun to descend, if it was that important you could check it yourself.” “I’m sorry.” he said anxiously “I’ll go check it.” I was always harsh with my crew, but I didn’t know better, I was young. Later on in the control center, I slowly guided the magnificent sub along the quickly moving currents. We must have been at least 600 feet in, there was no going back. At this moment James came in my room for the second time. “Captain?” he said completely out of breath “Yes?” I said sternly. “There is something on the radar. I ignored it before because I thought it would go away but it didn’t.” I was beginning to worry, but …show more content…

This was only my second time running a sub by myself, no one taught me how to deal with mysterious objects lurking in the darkness of the sea. Later on we must have been 900 feet underwater, I finally went to go check what was on the radar screen. Holding my breath with every step I took, I got closer to the door. I placed my hand on the ice cold doorknob, as my heart was nearly pounding out of my chest. I turned the knob with all of myself hoping there was nothing on the screen. Which was probably the longest 5 seconds of my life. I opened the door. Staring blank faced and lifeless at the screen I saw it, my worst fear, that big red dot on the face of the radar screen. I took a big swallow and asked “Do any of you know what it

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