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One Day Narrative

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The sunlight beamed through my window, waking me up to the sound of birds chirping in the tree outside. It felt just like any other morning to my happy ten-year-old self. Three days had passed since Christmas, and I was still relishing my new presents and Christmas break. As I entered into my living room, my brother Corbin was watching TV and who snuggled up in his favorite brown blanket. I made myself comfortable on the floor in front of him, when his phone rang. The call appeared to be my brother's friend since kindergarten, Ulu, who lived in Texas. As they proceeded to talk, I watched Corbin's face fill with confusion and concern. He had called to ask my brother if his best friend and our next door neighbor, Danny, had died. Corbin knew …show more content…

He did not say a word. He leaned against the back of the couch with his arms crossed and then told us that Danny was dead. He was struck by a drunk driver while riding his skateboard home the night before. My mom and I broke down in disbelief, unable to control the tears streaming down our faces. This boy, this innocent fourteen-year-old boy, so full of life, who was like my second brother, who could light up any room, made everyone feel like they had a lifelong friend, was gone. I kept repeating "I just saw Danny ride his skateboard down the street yesterday." Corbin was motionless, his breathing was slow, and his chest barely moving. It felt like I was watching his heart rip out from his chest. He showed no emotion, he simply stood speechless with his head down, staring at the floor beneath …show more content…

These types of tragedies can be avoided. There are many ways to prevent situations similar to this involving drivers under the influence. "In 2009, the year that Danny was killed, there were 10,839 alcohol-impaired-driving fatalities"(NHTSA’s). We were just one family hurt by this, one community reminded of the fragility of life, one mother that has to outlive her child. That same mother has lived through this tragedy twice, that cannot sink in enough. She was forced to bury her two young boys, ripped from her because someone made the choice to drive under the influence of alcohol. "Driver's with a BAC level of .08 or higher in fatal crashes were eight times more likely to have a prior conviction for driving while impaired than were drivers with no alcohol."(NHTSA’s) The driver who killed Danny, who stole a part of my brother's innocence, who took a mother's child, had already been arrested for driving under the

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