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Passive Voice In The Alchemist By Coelho

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In his career as a writer, Coelho has found an abundance of success: “Since the publication of his first work, The Pilgrimage, in 1987, he has sold 65 million books, making him the best-selling author in the world - above John Grisham, Tom Clancy and the seemingly unassailable J.K. Rowling”(Day). But for such a popular author, his books remain highly criticized, with almost always the same gripe from every critic: the simplicity of his style. Many cynics have dismissed his books “as "spiritual twaddle", "tosh," and "something David Hasselhoff might spout after a particularly taxing Baywatch rescue”(Day). The ironic thing about this is that Coelho’s simplicity is what allows for his writing to be successful in the first place. The simplicity allows for a wide variety of readers to connect at a greater level and at the same time put emphasis on the ideas themselves because there isn’t anything else to stand …show more content…

Coelho jumps right into the use of passive voice, the first two sentences being: “The boy’s name was Santiago. Dusk was falling as the boy arrived with his herd at an abandoned church” (Coelho 3). Coelho continues on like this for the rest of the page and even the rest of the novel. By using the passive voice immediately, he delves right into setting an alluring tone, also creating the sense that the reader is a recipient of a profound story from a wise old man (which they are and it is). The key to the effect is in the consistency, keeping the passive voice ever-present throughout the story. The last sentence of the novel being “The boy smiled. It was the first time she had done that”(Coelho 167). The reader doesn’t need worry about following an emotional rollercoaster which would be created by inconsistencies in tone. Instead, the job done by Coelho to keep the tone constant allows the reader to move on to analyzing the main themes of the

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