Peer Review

How does the diary or journal-entry form affect the emphasis of the narrative? How dependable is Charlie as a narrator as he progresses through his various stages? Discuss Charlie’s capability of providing insight to the other characters.

I have always found the peer review process to be beneficial on both ends, whether you are the writer or the reader, are being reviewed or are the reviewer. Having multiple sets of eyes proofread your paper should help more than hurt. It is your choice if you want to take the advice your peers gave. You have the option of not making any changes at all, so whether you decide to take the advice or not, it does not hurt to receive them. In Paper One, I found that peer reviewing others was a bit difficult because any comments made could be offending them. I felt that I would come off as criticizing the kind of person one is, instead of one's work since the assignment was to write about something that is personal.

The essays basically gave a partial view into these characters’ lives and informed us on why they like or dislike doing something specific in their lives. I liked the “Why I Hate Putting My Children to Bed” and how the author dreaded dealing with her kids’ shenanigans at bedtime. The fact that she wanted to just turn them off at night like you would a light switch was hilarious. Her point of view on what she had to endure when putting the kids to bed made the essay quite humorous. With there being so many arduous tasks in life, I would never have imagined putting kids to bed would be one of those tasks for someone! It was very interesting from her point of view and her tone kept me reading and laughing.

In a film article review I saw online the author input helps my point

The speech Martha gave near the conclusion on how Jack’s anger blinded him brought me to tears; I rooted for her from the story start and applauded when she sided with Frank whatever Jack’s intentions were going forward. Compelling and poignant; by far one among the most gripping and thought-provoking pieces I’ve read in a while. My advice to you, if you want to maximize the emotional impact it can have on readers, is to do more thorough checking.

Secondly, because this passage touches on the issue of what it means to tell an immigrant’s story. Although it might appear to be a shallow scene to contrast a more intimate moment between Patrick and Alice, the commentary is much deeper than

What the author did not seem to be impressed by was the overall storyline of the movie and questioned

During last week class, I was peer reviewed by Cindy Huynh and Francesca Joo. Both of them gave constructed and helpful advice to improve my resume. Their overall critiques were grammatical errors and font size errors. The most helpful comment from Cindy Huynh was to personalize the object for the intending internship/job. By personalizing the objective the employer will think that I am really interested in the corporation and really want to get a job at that corporation. Francesca Joo most helpful advice was to make the font more consistent. The first two sections contained smaller font compared to the other sections. I thought that the smaller and bigger font will make my resume stand out, but the resume just looks untidy. These two critiques

The peer review worksheet was a great help in providing us a guide of how to begin our meeting. However, prior to the meeting Tiana and I been communicating through email and exchanging our paper. We first touch base with each other, by asking how we are doing. For example, we express our thoughts and check to make sure we also did other assignments that was related to the course. Then, we answer each other questions regarding the paper. For example, the structure our paper, the contains, and our one on one. We discuss where we are at on our paper and what we still needed to touch up on. I shared her my peer feedback worksheet. Such as, her paper does make me feel like I was reading an article about personality disorder. She also shared me

“Heh, Applejack never complains; she once tried to harvest the whole orchard by herself. She’s the hardest working pony I know other than Big Mac.”

The writing process for the feasibility report followed in a similar manner as the proposal but there were some differences that provided my research partner, Alicia Buettner, and me the opportunity to learn from our peers. With the help of notes from class, I was able to adapt the content from the proposal and know what exactly was needed in terms of content for the results and discussions parts of our feasibility report. The aspect of the writing process that was different for the feasibility report was that of peer-reviewed feedback. By examining my peers’ papers, I was able to see some of the faults within Alicia’s and my paper, whether that be APA citation error or content missing from

[TOPIC SENTENCE #3] From the beginning and through the end of the play, Anne's personality, character, and life changes so much as she starts to develop emotions and motivations as time goes by. All throughout the years she spent at the Secret Annex, there were many memories, emotions, feelings, motivations, hardships, actions, life changing experiences, and many more things that were involved with everyone who lived with Anne in the Annex. In her years staying at the Annex her emotions were filled with love, despair, curiosity, peace, anger, denial, hope, and courage. For Anne she already had a various amount of things going on in her life from the start and in her diary was writing of all the things that happened during her time she spent at the Annex. For Anne, living in the upstairs attic with people she and her family didn't know had her filled up with many thoughts and emotions. Her relationship with Peter was very different from most couples you see today or at any other time period. Together, Peter and Anne shared an uncommon bond that made their relationship so special in

I chose to do my peer review on fellow nursing major Jessica Herman. She did her presentation on a girl who was in the education field. While nursing is a very complex study, Jessica did a great job at explaining and going over her memo interview and who her subject was. Furthermore, Jessica accurately mentioned all of the details that were listed in the rubric for the subject’s writing category, and it was obvious she gained a lot of knowledge through completion of the interview and project. In addition, Jessica displayed confidence during the entire presentation and this was evident by the volume of her voice, not to loud and not to quite. Eye contact is also very important and she made sure to keep in constant visual contact with the entire

PER REPORTER: The reporter said she is a concerned neighbor who has seen the children miss school due to their parents being to lazy to get up and get the children ready for school. The reporter said she believes the children miss six or seven days out of school every month. She said when the parents do send the children to school they have on the same clothes three or four days out of the week. She also mentioned that the children’s parents do not make them take baths; however, she said the family does have running water as well as a working bath tub. She also mentioned that the family has a washier but she said she is unsure if they have a dryer. The reporter said every time she goes to the family’s house she notices that their yard and the

“I reckon you’re right Sweetie Belle. But what in tarnation can we do?” The young Apple Bloom wondered. “Our last plan didn’t turn out so well.”