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The teenage boy stood there still as stone, a marble statue, his flesh had gone beyond the colour of marble, to a new ghostly tinge of white, void of colour. His eyes were the only thing expressing any emotion, and that was fear. Extreme fear, the kind where you can feel your impending death, as it stares you in the face. After moments of complete petrification the traumatised boy spoke in a shaky and terrified voice.
“W-Why are you h-here Lock, get away from me please…” he said to my boyfriend, his eyes flinching, as if his body wasn’t still petrified. Eric, my boyfriend, chuckled loudly, that real genuine laugh, the one that your dad would make which felt warm and hearty like a hug during a thunderstorm. Usually it’d lighten up a conversation, …show more content…

This wasn’t the first time my boyfriend had had one of these ominous encounters. He had someone, somewhere who apparently looked so much like him that people have mistaken him for them and not just one or twice. This man apparently went by the name Lock, but he doesn’t exactly come off as a friendly, or even normal person. Despite never meeting him, Eric’s encounters with Lock’s acquaintances had created an image of a very sinister and malevolent man, the sort of guy who’d probably break his child’s arm. Although as Eric and I comforted this poor boy, and explained that Eric wasn’t Lock, he calmed down. The conversation eventually ended on an awkward mixture of embarrassment and discomfort as the kid’s sickly white face flushed with red, like blood stains on fresh snow, although his eyes pained with an unnerving sense of relief and …show more content…

But Eric was sort of like me, we didn’t seem to talk much while in the car, especially at night it, it was reflecting time, time to look at the stars and think. Although after half an hour the silence was getting a bit eerie.
“Don’t tell your mum about this,” Eric said, cutting the silence with a knife, as if silence were something you could cut. His words were solemn and awkward, it made me shift in my seat.
“Okay,” I replied confused, I didn’t really know why, but my mum was a very messed up person. The old thing had really lost her marbles when she got dementia, she’d thought often think Eric was the Lock person, even though she’d never met

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