Personal Narrative: A Visit to Universal Studios and Disney in Orlando

My stepmother, my father, their grandchild, and I took a family vacation to Busch Gardens. Upon leaving time, we packed for the stay in Richmond, VA. My father got the truck ready, Karen, my stepmother, brought a pillow with a purple cup full of ice. The grandchild got together her toys and was just as happy as she could be at 6:30 A.M. in the morning. I, on the other hand, was beyond ready to jump right back into bed and sleep for another year because I could’ve probably have done it that hot day.

Have you ever gotten lost as a kid? Maybe in a store or, at the mall and your whole world feels like it’s crumbling, piece by piece? Well, I’ve gotten lost too. At Disney World.

My family and I traveled to Six Flags this summer for a family vacation. Six Flags is located outside of Atlanta,Georgia. While traveling to Six Flags we stopped at the Birmingham Zoo. when going down the Goliath,I panicked and started to scream.We rode another roller coaster and my fear became more magnified. We also rode the bumper cars and my brother ran into me. We didn't want to spend our summer patrolling the neighborhood on our scooters. We also went because we didn't work interfering with our family time. We wanted to go somewhere fun and exciting. While dinning at our vacation this summer we saw a chef chopping vegtables. The weekend we went to Six Flags qualified as a vacation.On our trip to Six Flags my brother interfered with

Working as an event coordinator at Six Flags Magic Mountain, I get to meet a lot of new people. I host corporate and private events for business and families. My job keeps me entertained. I remember one day being at work and I was hosting a picnic for a company with over 200 employees. I was doing my normal walk through of the picnic area. I like to walk the entire area to make sure all my guests are enjoying themselves. I had made my way to the back area where the basketball court is located. I noticed there was a young pre-teen male, who looked about 12 years old. His behavior was usual for an atypical developing individual. He was jumping up and down in a circular motion. Other guests were uncomfortable and asked me to call security to have

When I was in Kindergarten we went to Disney World for the first time. It was our last day, and since my brother was still in a stroller, we went to mostly shows. The only problem with that is trying to leave the show can be difficult because there are so many people trying to leave the same theatre at once. We were at Animal Kingdom and had been there all day. Our family friends were with us, there were 5 of them in there family. It was an especially crowded day, everything we did we had to wait in line for, usually over an hour. Waiting in line was boring, and made me want to run around even more than I normally did when I was 5.

“Are you packed yet?” These are the only words my mom say been saying to me for the last three weeks. We had been planning our trip to Disney World since Easter when my parents surprised me and my siblings with our plan tickets. That was seven months ago. There was now less than 24 hours before we would be heading to the Dubuque Airport and I was just deciding to pack. I was running through a check list in my head: shorts, tanktops, shirts, sweatshirts, jeans, shoes, hats, sunglasses, swimsuits, pajamas, underwear, and bras. Check! Now on to bath stuff: toothbrush, hairbrush, face wash, contacts, contacts solution, makeup and hair ties. Check! I hate packing because of all the dumb rules the airport has. Like the rule where you can’t have any liquids bigger than 5 oz. or whatever it is.

In the year of 2012 is the year I went to Disney world First Me and my family got on the road to go to the air port and we were having so much fun and we got on this bus and went throw this metal detector.After that we got on the plane to go to Florida and when we go there their were people with board with are names on them to take us to the place we was going to be staying The next day we woke up and the place we were staying in was like a home and had free shops so we got up eat breakfast and got ready to go to Disney and we seen a lot of thinks i will never forget and then we came back to where we where staying and eat lunch and dinner and me and my sister we playing games and eating ice cream. Finally we go in the car to go back to the

I never thought I would make great friends that they would take me to Orlando. We stayed at Orlando for 3 days. 3 friends and I went to Orlando. We had and an amazing time there. We stayed at the gay lord palms hotel. The people who went there went me are my best friends, Will, Jordan, and Preston.

Remember those trips to the store or the mall you took with your mom because you either wanted something or you had to go? Everywhere you went, there’s always that one family with that one child that does something to the extreme that embarrasses them to cause everyone in the store to look. They could be running around knocking things down, screaming to the top of their lungs because they couldn’t get what they wanted. Then you always have that one in the family that believes they are invisible and runs around the store with little to no clothes on. It’s funny at first because you know you would never do that at all. However, that is when you’re older and you don’t believe the stories your parents tell you. I, undoubtingly, fall into that category.

I would like to go is Disney because i can sing and dance, meet characters, and ride rides. Disney World is known as “the most magical place in the world”. It is a really fun place to go for a vacation.

In 2014 during my vacation in Florida, I learned that greed can make people do things they don't normally do. When I was 14 years old I wanted a new xbox game that had been just released, my dad gave me and my brothers a certain amount of money to spend during the vacation and buy things we wanted, but I already wasted it all. I remember passing near GameStop every day and watch other people buy the game, my heart got accelerated every time I saw it. My three other brothers still had enough money they put as a reserve, which I didn't.

Disney World is considered one of the happiest places on earth and I would agree with that statement I love Disney now and even more so when I was younger. We began going to Disney every year from when I turned around five years old and it was a great experience. Our 2004 trip took a turn that led to a very interesting experience of Disney, specifically the Epcot theme park.

Excited. That is what I was, I was in the car riding to Universal Studios in Florida and I was eager to get there. I couldn't wait to ride all the rides, and see all the insane things to see. But there was one in particular. The Harry Potter ride.

I treasured it when my parents took me to Disney World. One of my favorite places I visited as a child, as well. One of the things that caught my attention with this rough draft is how you did so well with using transitional phrases. This is something I need to work on and you a really good at using these in this essay. You achieved using the right amount of words as instructed. You also did your MLA format correctly from what I see. The only thing catching my eye would be your title. Keep it the same as your body of the essay. Do not italicize your title. My spelling suggestions would be to change “in to” to “into” in the sentence starting with “My family and I just went...” This is the only thing I saw as far as spelling goes. My Grammar

The world where fantasy comes to life. From the breathtaking views to exhilarating amusement park rides, this wonder exceeded my expectations. The endless feeling of excitement stretching for miles upon miles. The place where my imaginations became reality, the wonders of Disneyworld was an experience I would never forget.