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Personal Narrative Essay

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Ally’s family is very wealthy but, their money couldn’t help her father’s sickness, he died in 1947. Her mother remarried to a rich man that had a daughter of his own. Ally was sure that her stepsister Ally hated her guts she just didn’t know why. Ally hated that her mom had to choose a man with so much money because it felt like he was trying to buy their love. Ally had to get used to the new house. One evening Ally went exploring in the house. In the outside, there was a gorgeous garden. She skipped over to the small fountain, there was frogs on the outside and one bright white flower. She thought it was odd that there was only one, she touched one of the petals, a secret door opens. She felt like it was calling her in, once she walks in …show more content…

She walks in and sees one of the butlers dusting expensive pottery. She walks over to the buttler and asks him to knock over the vase he swung his hand and knocked it over. Ally now new how much power she had that she can use. I can use this on Victoria. Then maybe she would stop being so cruel to me. The dark magic was taking over her. Later that night during dinner the table was silent. This is a great first dinner well I wish it was. Ally got the perfect idea. The maids coming in the room with the drinks she commanded them to accidentally drop it on Victoria. Victorias face went red she stormed off. The next morning she woke up and the rose was all dried up and black. She threw it away and went to get another one. The place didn't look the same, dead flower laid on the ground. Ally didn’t care she grabbed many more roses. Day after day Ally plots more revenge on victoria and the more power Ally got. The secret place with the roses was getting worse and worse. One late night Ally was still awake and heard someone crying, to her surprise it was Victoria. Ally lightly knocked on the door. Vitoria face streaming with tears and her eyes red. What do I do? Do I hug her or what? Ally sat next to victoria, victoria hugged her tight. Why is she crying? Is it because of me. Ally was starting to realize victoria didn’t hate her she was just sad that her dad married another

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