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Personal Narrative : My Favorite Friend Of Eight Years

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Naomi Bushard
June 27th, 2017
ENGL 1204
Birthday Surprise I retreated further into my seat after the porch light flickered off. I sat frozen, letting the darkness mask my presence. My heart startled to a stop as a car passed by and the headlights reflected off the rim of my glasses.
Shoot, I just ruined the whole plan! A week of planning thrown away by a pre-sunrise traveler. An entire week of patience and secrets led up to this moment. I stayed up the entire night thinking about how Courtney, my best friend of eight years, would react after discovering I would be traveling with her for spring break. With only an hour of sleep, I shuffled around the house, scraping my luggage together. I put on a lime green t-shirt and a pair of jean …show more content…

Alright, now how can I hide myself in the car?
Bud moseyed on up to the front door, his shoes scraping across the pavement with every step. A flood light beamed into the car window as he walked in front of the garage. I used the hood of my sweatshirt to cover my face and compressed myself as far down to the floor as I could go. With my presence concealed by my sweatshirt and the darkness of the morning, I could only hope that Bud would carry out the surprise until Courtney got to the car. Bud attempted to knock on the door but it sounded more like two light taps. Their dog, with ears like a bat, heard the tapping and broke the peaceful quiet with his deep loud barks. He had woken the neighbors and also ridded me of any drowsiness I still had. As Courtney made her way out the door and shut off the porch light, the neighbors turned theirs on to see what the barking was about. I tried to hide as best as I could among the shadows that remained as the dull lights produced by the neighboring houses flowed into the car. After she closed the door, they started walking to the car. Soon, all of my patience would pay off.
Courtney’s mom and stepdad refused to give Courtney any details on the trip they had planned for her birthday. A week prior to our spring break, I got a text inviting me to Florida for Courtney’s birthday trip. Impulsively, I had responded that I would love to be a part of this surprise before I even let my parents approve

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