Personal Narrative: My Revisions

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I read over the comments you made on the paper at least a dozen times. I took the time to understand what you correcting. I feel that most of my revisions were explaining a little more then I original did.
The first paragraph was very straightforward. I added my source for my statistic and corrected the minor errors. I found myself really struggling with one revision in the second paragraph. I’m just not getting measurable variables. I thought I understood what you were talking about in class, but I guess not. I looked up video lessons online about measuring variables. It did help but not as much as I would have liked. I defined my questions better. The third paragraph wasn’t something I really struggled with, but I found it hard to
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