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Pt1420 Unit 6 Assignment

Decent Essays

1. Did they write all parts?
Feedback:
Part A: Topic Selection and Definition
• I would start out by including a definition of the project vs. listing the objective on page 2. The objective should come in later, in Part D. Maybe include headers for the Parts to keep the paper organized, page numbers would also make the paper easier to read and reference.
• Part A should also include information to let the reader determine the following
“Is the topic related to your organization, the community, or a personal interest? Does the topic align with Regis University’s mission: ‘men and women in service to others’? Is the topic manageable? Is the topic attainable? (doable within 8 weeks)Is the topic one that you are passionate about?”
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You say that “The main issues that are to be addressed when dealing with the homeless youth are their concerns as a whole meaning what they believe should be addressed”. What are these issues? I think it may be helpful to define homeless youth with an age range and then include data telling the percentage of people within that age range who are homeless. Also are you targeting homeless youth or homeless children, or both? The reader wants to know why the project is relevant. In order to determine relevance the problem clearly defined and data needs to be used to support the …show more content…

Project Process
• I didn’t see a header for “Project Process”.
Part F. Project Investigation and Data Gathering Plans
• Reaching out to the Gathering Place is a good primary resource.
• What secondary resources will you be utilizing?
• Missing the following information. “Include a specific manner of project evaluation. How will you determine your level of success? What will you measure? Whose evaluative input will you seek”?
• You might think about creating a list for this part of the project beginning with the first step – so the reader gets a clear idea of the sequence of the steps you will take to complete the research and data gathering needed for your project.
Part G. Project Timeline
• The project timeline should be from weeks 2-8.
• By sorting the timeline in months I can’t get a clear idea of how you will accomplish the project in this course. “The Timeline must be consistent with the milestone dates noted in the Project Objectives and is open to revision”.
2. Are the objectives obtainable? Feedback: More information is needed in order to determine if the objective is obtainable.
3. Is there an explanation of how the project provides a service to others – in the work place, the community or in the academic arena – following the Regis Mission as “men and women in service to

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