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To: The Shorthorn Editor: What is beauty to you? Is it having perfect teeth, amazing hair, and the hourglass figure; or is beauty what makes the person they are today. Everyone has a different opinion on beauty. Raina Kelley makes an argument over beauty in an article called “Beauty Is Defined, and Not By You.” Although she makes a somewhat valid argument, I find that there is much more to this topic. Yes, body image is becoming more of an issue in today’s world, especially within young girls and women. In a study that was done by the Journal of the American Academy of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry in 1999 found that twenty percent of nine year olds and over forty percent of fort-teen year olds reported wanting to lose weight. In addition …show more content…

The first reason she talks about is, success can be gained without beauty. I find there to be some logic behind this. But the warrant she is making is if there are many opportunities then standards do not matter. So if that were the case professional office workers could come to work wearing whatever they want with hair a mess because standards do not matter. As we all know that would not go over well with the boss. The author provides some evidence to back her reasoning up. Saying that “despite the $20 billion U.S beauty industry bearing down on us that a study that was released by a market-research firm stating that in April that revealed that teens and women are now using beauty products in significantly fewer quantities, down six percent from 2008-2009.” The evidence does back her claim slightly, but what other evidence is there to justify the warrant she is making. Beauty is simply not just about what makeup someone is using or how much. In addition, she uses an example of “clearly, eligibility for the Sports Illustrated swimsuit issue is not required to succeed or even to change the world.” Also, there are way too many exceptions to this warrant, such as the standards in the military, cheerleading, actors, models and public speakers just to name a few. To be successful as a fitness model, or body builder that would require he or she to be in shape because if a person is …show more content…

Raina Kelley comes off as very negative. Rather than invoking positive reinforcement on the topic of beauty. She uses such context as “yes, people can be vicious in their categorization of women’s looks; insult them back or ignore them.” I think it is fair to say most people are not going to agree with that statement. Most of us grew up with our parents saying that two wrongs don’t make a right. So if she is trying to convince the audience to be on her side and agree I believe the way she is going about it is completely wrong. In addition, one would believe that being negative would hurt one’s beauty standard. I find rude, and negative to be very ugly because my view of beauty is that not only do looks have part to do with beauty but what makes you up as a person in values is very important as well. Also, she goes on to say in her article “that most of the world’s women aren’t Vogue-approved hotties and still so many to manage to kick ass in law school, business school and or medical school, and not by sitting in a plastic surgeon’s office or the gym all day.”. I find that she has very little emotion towards the people she is writing to nor just she care about what they think. So that alone may make the people not want to read or even hear what she has to say. Additionally, she begins her article talking about race, saying that as a rounded black woman with curly hair, the best she can hope for is moderately

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