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Raymond Barrio's The Sun Goes Down On Summer

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Raymond Barrio and Steve Lawhead are both well-known poets, with varying styles. But are some of their works similar? The Plum Plum Pickers (RB) and The Sun Goes Down on Summer (SL) are two pieces that have been selected to be compared. The Plum Plum Pickers is a poem about a man, Manuel, who believes he is worked like an animal. Beast, savage, brute, predator, animal, locked, wreck; these are the words that are used to describe him. He’s trapped in a never ending field of apricot trees. He’s alone even though he’s surrounded by other workers, because he’s different. He’s dry even though he’s sweating nonstop, it’s so hot and dry. Water and lunch are Manuel’s only saviors. He uses the water to give relief to his steaming, tired body and most …show more content…

He describes summer as cool, gentle waters, something he likes and he’s now used to. As he describes high school and not gentle waters, like a pressure cooker of competition, something that’s always changing and that he is not ready for. He tells how the first day of school is always the worst because everything from the year before has changed, you don’t know who your friends are yet, and it’s hard to pick up everything where you left off from the previous year. He wants to be himself, and he expresses that is the reason he quit football, he didn’t know why he was playing, or who he was playing for. He says school is full of things that take away freedom and keep you from being who you really are. And that being yourself isn’t easy. At the end of the poem, you see a resolution of his thoughts. He realizes that he might learn something about himself, and a new school year means a brand new start, and he comes to terms with his first day back to high school. Lawhead doesn’t use sound very much throughout his poem. Although, he does use rhythm. He uses repeating and similar words and phrases to create emphasis. The beginning is slower and drags out to give a sense of anxiety, and starts to pick up near the end to give a sense of optimism. Lawhead’s structure contains forty

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