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Reflection On My Writing

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Over the course of the semester we have written multiple papers with an assortment of topics. Writing the various papers has expanded my writing skills because each paper required different skills to satisfy the requirements of the paper. Through the various strategies we have learned in class I have improved my writing tremendously through using clear and precise language, considering feedback, and incorporating and explaining evidence. Before starting each assignment first, I made sure that I understood the topic we were writing about. Making sure that I had a clear understanding of the essay ensured that my essay would be on topic at least. I was able to produce my first draft off each essay by sitting down at my laptop and just writing whatever came to mind. Using that method, I usually ended up with more words than I needed however, ending up with extra words caused me to do a ton of editing. I was able to fix this problem by separating the necessary aspects needed in the paper from all of the extra fluff I had unnecessarily added. Also, I learned by taking away the fluff it gives emphasizes on the topic you are trying to get across. In my original argument analysis I wrote “ To get a better understanding to what Ellison and other races had to go through we have to be able to have conversations on the situations that’s happened in the past however we cannot do that if everyone is scared to participate.” The sentence is not completely terrible however it is not straight to the point. The extra fluff words such as “to”, “have” and “that” are vague words that could easily be replaced with words that would be more effective. Having these extra fluff words could cause the reader to close off or not read all of what I have to say because of all of the extra information I put in the sentence. Making the sentence clear makes it easier to read the easier it is to read more people will be willing to read what I am trying to say. In the process in which I would revise my paper the first step I would take was to make sure the draft was a proper representation of the point I was trying to make. That means going through adding and subtracting parts of the paper that were not effective or off

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