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Rhetorical Analysis Adult Jail

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As a second semester freshman, I found English 102 to be one of my favorite classes. My professor Sally Benson, structured our class’s curriculum around issues in the prison system. More specifically juveniles in adult prisons, college classes for incarcerated individuals, and prison privatization. I found this quite interesting because every assignment we did directly correlated to these three issues. In the beginning of the semester, we, as a class, analyzed all three of these issues, to get a become well acquainted with each topic. This helped tremendously when it came to writing the first paper, the rhetorical analysis. Student were asked to choose a text from a list of resources and analyse how that text works- what he/she see a text saying, …show more content…

The information I used to present in each argument highlighted key facts on the issue and familiarized both audiences on why I believe of juveniles in adult jails is unjust. I effective did this by using this quote “The reality is, in America, some criminals make it out alive with a decent head on their shoulders, many make it out mentally, emotionally, and/ or physically damaged, others make it out to go back in and the rest don’t make it out at all”. This quote not only outright explain the problem and supports my stance. Shaping the argument for both the open letter and presentation was the easiest part of both assignments because of the issue I chose. To prove how unjust this issue was, I used the stories of Taurus Buchanan and Kalief Browder as examples of how the prison system causes more self harm than self healing for these troubled juveniles. After presenting that quote and two anecdotes to both audiences, I make a call for action to get both parties involved. I did this by presenting the solution: Instead of immediately sending these offenders straight to an adult facility, he/she should be sentenced a juvenile sentence until they are eighteen, and when this occurs he/she will be transferred to an adult facility to serve the rest of their time. This causes …show more content…

In this case the mediated audience of this paper would Professor Benson, and readers of the New York Times. Because this was an open letter, I knew the format, flow of information, statistical evidence, and credibility as an author were critical to my paper. The format of my paper followed the structure of an open letter written in a major newspaper companies. This also structured the flow of information I presented because typically open letters range from five hundred to seven hundred words, so i open the letter up with the question “ If you were a parent, would you be comfortable with your eleven or twelve year old child living with a sixty year old rapist?”. By doing this I catch the audience's attention almost immediately without having to go through an introduction. Following the question, to advance my argument I use the statistical evidence that “practice of charging young people as adults gained momentum in America in the 1990s, as youth crime spiked” from another newspaper company to build credibility with the audience. In doing this, I provide evidence that juveniles in adults prison is a growing issue in the united states. To close the open letter I provide facts on behalf of the opposing argument, to cut bias and opinionated tone out of my argument. The major difference between

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