Rhetorical Analysis – Other Voices, Other Rooms

1060 Words Apr 3rd, 2015 5 Pages
In this essay, “Other Voices, Other Rooms”, Professor Gerald Graff offers that education at a university could be exciting and rewarding for students. However, it applies to those who have developed the skills at summarizing, weighing arguments and synthesizing conflicting points. Unfortunately, not all students possess these skills and as they start getting confused they will care more about appeasing the professor in order to obtain good grades. In return, they will give their professors whatever they want even though it seems contradictory to their beliefs (339). Graff believes that not all college students possess the skills necessary to be successful and that professors are only making the issue worse by teaching in a vacuum. …show more content…
Graff says that contrast is fundamental to learning and in order to fully grasp the concept, and the subject needs to be understood in relation to other ideas. In his second example, in attempting to strengthen his argument, Graff uses an academic reference, The Structure of Scientific Revolutions by Thomas S. Kuhn. Kuhn says,
“Both the literati and the scientist have remained largely walled up within their clashing assumptions about objectivity, the smugness of which might have been punctured had these parties been forced to argue with each other in their teaching” (341). Even though Graff and Kuhn share the same thoughts, Kuhn’s reference does not provide any evidence to support his claims. He then introduces Gregory Colomb, which his reference again doesn’t add credibility; it detracts from the essay because readers have to read the text several times just to get through this part of the writing. Graff says, “Imagine trying to write and academic paper when you send that almost anything you say can be used against you and that the intellectual moves that got you an A in existentialist philosophy may get you a C minus and a dirty look in Skinnerian behaviorism (342)”. He goes on to say, “When students fail to identify a cultural literacy item on a test, the problem
Open Document