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Logan Wetherington Story of Sarah Sarah grew up in a small town outside of Houston, Texas. She was raised by both her parents and had a year older brother named Tim. Tim was the star quarterback at Washington Heights. He took the Hornets to the state championship as a freshman. Everyone at school loved Tim he was intelligent, handsome, kind, and athletic. All the features needed to make up a perfect student. While Tim as athletic and popular, Sarah was unpopular and mostly keep to herself when she could. All throughout Sarah’s life she was not as good enough as Tim. Ever since Sarah was young she was seen as the sister to Tim the great football player. All through elementary school Tim was the favorite, favorite to the teachers, students, and …show more content…

While everyone paid attention to Tim, Sarah was the outcast. No one would ever invite her to birthday parties or pick her to play on their team at recess. It was very hard on Sarah to see everyone love her brother but not her. Sarah spent most of her time working on school work, reading, and painting. Sarah loved to paint, she would paint every day she could after school. She made it her mission to paint a new painting every day and get better and better. Sarah entered one of her paintings into the school contest one year and didn’t win. Even though her painting was the best her brother won the contest with a painting of a football field. Sarah stopped painting after the heartbreak of losing the contest. She couldn’t relive the defeat of losing to her brother again. When Sarah got to middle school she was excited for school. It was a new start, a new building, with more new students. Though she knew her brother was in the 8th grade she didn’t Heather Wilson: Good job here for knowing your story well. Now move it from telling to show. Play it out like a scene. Heather Wilson: dash Heather Wilson: good job building the story think they would encounter each other that often. At the beginning of the school year …show more content…

At the end of the day Mr. Jones came on the intercom and informed all the students to go to the auditorium to watch the talent show. As the talent show began the performers went one by one. This time Tim went first, he walked onto the stage with his same clothes and back up dancers. He finished his performance and the crowd went crazy. Up next and last was Sarah, she walked onto the same stage as the one she ran off of. She looked at the same audio guy and nodded. But this time she didn’t freeze up, she sang Respect better than Aretha Franklin herself. The crowd was silent, they had no idea Sarah could sing like she did. Then one person stood up and started clapping and one after another until everyone in the room was standing and clapping. At the moment in time everyone in the room knew who Sarah was. Sarah finally got what she wanted, for people to know who she was. Although it was hard for her growing up to an older, athletic, and popular brother she now knows she is just as important as him. Sarah took that encouragement onto her senior year at Washington Heights. Where she was on student council and won the talent show again for back to back

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