Section 2 Multiple Paragraph Essay

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Section 2- Multi-paragraph Are We Raising the Morally Illiterate Kids? We are raising morally illiterate kids? I am agreed with her thesis. This is the main thing she is telling in her thesis and also she has used many persuasive techniques like alliteration, point of view, emotional language, ironic situations etc very effectively. In today's world, most of the children are not aware of morally teachings. They are lack of them. They don’t know how to behave with elders, with their fellow students or friends. They spend their most of time watching TV, playing video games, texting on cell phone and listening songs with head-phones. They love to be alone. They don’t have any time for helping the people who are old, helpless and with…show more content…
They should listen to them, discuss their problems, and should also take in their confidence that they will always stand for them in every problem. They should teach them how to respect others, their opinions. As well also tell them about moral values. They should teach them patience, tolerance and how to get confidence in themselves (children). Teachers can also play a big role in it by making them learn these things in the school because after home, children spend their most of time in the school. Persuasive Techniques:- She has used many these techniques in her thesis as imagery, facts, personal anecdote, expert testimony etc. With the help of these techniques she is succeeded to impress her audience. With the help of them she successfully tells the main ideas of her essay. The goal of these techniques is to persuade the audience to believe or do something. Here are some techniques, she has used in her thesis:- 1. Expert testimony:- We don’t believe on anything easily unless that is told by any specific person. We rely on experts to advise us about things that we don’t know ourselves. Scientists, doctors, professors and other professionals often appear in ads and advocacy messages, lending their credibility to the product, service, or idea being sold. She has used many times this techniques in it. For example,'' I'm not saying kids are immoral, I am saying that they don't have the same background, the same set of rules as before." says Burle
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