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Short Story Of Tom Derren's War

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Tom Derren stood, fear and excitement enveloping him every step he took. “Men, halt!” A clear voice rang out. Almost everyone stopped, a few stumbling from their wounds. “Today, we all will fight to the death- for the freedom of America!” General Washington rallied. A shouts and cries came in agreement. They were signaled to move on, and Tom clutched his musket tightly to his chest. To most he was still just a child- only 16 years old. However, he had lied to the General. A sense of shame crawled on his back, but he shook it off. No matter, he couldn’t back out now. Tom sucked in his breath when he saw the top of the fort. He looked to his side to see french soldiers coming by the thousands. He blinked in surprise and then looked ahead. …show more content…

Many men fell around him, blood painting the ground a burgundy color. More and more british soldiers retreated as far back as they could. “Advance men! We’ll have them soon enough!” General Washington cried. “Aller de l'avant!” General Lafayette ordered. Tom wished that he’d payed more attention when his mother tried very hard to get him to listen when she taught french. Tom fired his musket at another british soldier. He gasped in pain as a bullet dug into his shoulder, throwing him to the ground. Red, hot blood dripped from his arm. He winced in pain and clenched his jaw. Tom grabbed his shoulder in a desperate attempt to stop the bleeding. He began to slip into unconsciousness as he lost more blood.
Tom flashed back to Christmas Eve. General Washington had come up with a brilliant but risky plan. He remembered crossing the freezing, icy river in the early morning hours. Even though most thought it was impossible, they were able to capture the fort with ease. It was the first win Tom had ever experienced while fighting the war. It was a strangely fond memory in his mind, despite everything that happened so far.
Tom awoke in a cot, practically springing himself out of it. “Sir, please calm down! It’s alright!” A woman rushed over. Her hair was in a tight bun, with frizzy strands sticking out of it. She sighed and took out a piece of paper. “Did we… win?” Tom asked nervously. The woman handed his the paper. It read “Independence At Last!” as the news heading. He

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