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Short Story: The Drive To The Browns

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"Uuh… Mia, are you sure it's safe coming here", I asked my best friend while walking up a mountain track to get to an end of the summer party. "God, Raven, stop worrying for once and let's have fun", she said with her back towards me. It was getting dark, and we're kinda of late because my dad always checks up on me at nine to see what I'm up to, then Mia decided to change her shoe which lead to changing her whole outfit so we left around nine forty-five. The drive to the browns mountains wasn't short either. It took us five hours with little traffic. "I don't always worry", I said defending myself. "It's just that I don't know these people and if my dad finds out, you know what that means". She throws her arms up in the air …show more content…

I shake my head then grab her wrists "No, your perfect and I wish you'd talk to me about what's going on in your life and see that it's also affecting our friendship". She shook my hands off then turned around to reach for the door. "Like I said before 'it's nothing' god can you just let it go, your starting to get on my nerves" her tone was calm but the words cut through me like a knife. Just when I was about to say something back the door swung open. "Hold on girl let me just take this call real quick" a short black girl with long single braids came out the door she didn't notice us until she turned around. "Holy sh--" she jumped and almost dropped her phone. "Well damn y'all over here scaring me half to death, almost gave me a damn heart attack, why are you guys out here any--" she stops then looks up at Mia. "Mia Brown is that you I thought you weren't coming, come here girl and give me a …show more content…

Dominique looks over Mia's shoulder her eyes widening as she looks directly at me. She looks back at Mia her hands to her mouth. "Oh, yeah I mean this other Raven girl" she looks at me again then smiles apologetically "uh anyways I have to call back thanks to you two" she moves passed us and heads straight to the woods in the dark without a flashlight. "What was she talking about? Who's this 'other Raven' that you know and when do I get to meet her?" I asked not at all fooled that she knows some other Raven girl. "She was just joking, ray, come on let's party I need a drink" she walked in before I could stop her and I lost her in the crowd of people that were laughing, drinking, and dancing to the loud music. Frustrated I walk into the house then closed the door making sure I don't lock it behind my back. "Mia" I shout pushing through people. The house is big but not big enough to fit everyone that's here. It looks like it would only fit 20 people but there's like double the amount it was meant for. "Hey, dude, what the heck is your problem" I turn around to the girl I just poked in the head with my

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