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Sports Leads

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For me, the best sports leads are ones that either raise a question or evoke an emotion. Most people are easily distracted in this era filled with constant distractions and people with the attention spans like squirrels. I can even attest to having one of these squirrel attention spans, and as such, if I am reading a story that does not entice me quickly enough, I usually just move on. I have found that the best way to maintain the attention span of a reader is by posing an irresistible question or by making them so emotional, that they cannot resist reading. I found three good examples of a sports lead that are able to raise questions to peak a reader’s interest, and one example of a sports lead that is able to move the emotion meter of a …show more content…

I find it especially interesting compared to if the story was about any other team, due to the fact that the Raiders have not been a traditionally good team for the past several years. Hearing that they performed extremely well makes me curious to see how well they really did. Another story about the Philadelphia Eagles starts with “Yo, Philly: Book that trip to Houston in February. Carson Wentz is the real deal and he's taking the Philadelphia Eagles to the Super Bowl.” This lead is similar to the Raiders story because it makes such a bold claim about the Eagles performance that I just need to read more to figure out what exactly they did to be so highly praised. There is no bigger claim than saying that a team is going to the Superbowl after Week 3 of the season. All three of these stories with Auburn, the Raiders and the Eagles, all pose an irresistible mystery for me that I need to know the answer to; this is one of the elements I believe are essential to a good sports …show more content…

There always needs to be a reason for me to care about anything that I read, if I do not care about it, then why should I spend my time reading it? A prime example I found of invoking emotion in a lead was in a story about the Marlins game earlier this week. On Sunday, one of the Marlins prized players tragically passed away after a boating accident. The lead read “The Miami Marlins had to take the field Monday night. They had to — in a rather crass view — not for themselves, and not to honor their beloved teammate, Jose Fernandez, who died early Sunday morning in a boating accident in Miami Beach.” I have no connection to the Marlins baseball team at all, but this lead made me want to care, it made me want to sympathize with the family, team, and fans of Jose Fernandez. The lead demonstrated the pain that the team was suffering through by the statement “had to take the field”. They did not have to take the field because they owed it to Fernandez or to the fans, they had to because it was their job and they had no other option about it. They were clearly suffering and wanted nothing to do with the game and had to force themselves through their own pain just to play, that is a powerful

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