For me, the best sports leads are ones that either raise a question or evoke an emotion. Most people are easily distracted in this era filled with constant distractions and people with the attention spans like squirrels. I can even attest to having one of these squirrel attention spans, and as such, if I am reading a story that does not entice me quickly enough, I usually just move on. I have found that the best way to maintain the attention span of a reader is by posing an irresistible question or by making them so emotional, that they cannot resist reading. I found three good examples of a sports lead that are able to raise questions to peak a reader’s interest, and one example of a sports lead that is able to move the emotion meter of a …show more content…
I find it especially interesting compared to if the story was about any other team, due to the fact that the Raiders have not been a traditionally good team for the past several years. Hearing that they performed extremely well makes me curious to see how well they really did. Another story about the Philadelphia Eagles starts with “Yo, Philly: Book that trip to Houston in February. Carson Wentz is the real deal and he's taking the Philadelphia Eagles to the Super Bowl.” This lead is similar to the Raiders story because it makes such a bold claim about the Eagles performance that I just need to read more to figure out what exactly they did to be so highly praised. There is no bigger claim than saying that a team is going to the Superbowl after Week 3 of the season. All three of these stories with Auburn, the Raiders and the Eagles, all pose an irresistible mystery for me that I need to know the answer to; this is one of the elements I believe are essential to a good sports …show more content…
There always needs to be a reason for me to care about anything that I read, if I do not care about it, then why should I spend my time reading it? A prime example I found of invoking emotion in a lead was in a story about the Marlins game earlier this week. On Sunday, one of the Marlins prized players tragically passed away after a boating accident. The lead read “The Miami Marlins had to take the field Monday night. They had to — in a rather crass view — not for themselves, and not to honor their beloved teammate, Jose Fernandez, who died early Sunday morning in a boating accident in Miami Beach.” I have no connection to the Marlins baseball team at all, but this lead made me want to care, it made me want to sympathize with the family, team, and fans of Jose Fernandez. The lead demonstrated the pain that the team was suffering through by the statement “had to take the field”. They did not have to take the field because they owed it to Fernandez or to the fans, they had to because it was their job and they had no other option about it. They were clearly suffering and wanted nothing to do with the game and had to force themselves through their own pain just to play, that is a powerful
“Rejected by Rose,” screamed, TNT broadcaster, Kevin Harlan. Derrick Rose’s block on Rajon Rondo’s shot was the play that forced game 7 and kept the Bull’s season alive. The 2009 first round series between the Chicago Bulls and the reigning NBA champions, Boston Celtics was the best playoff series I ever watched. What does Rose’s late-game heroics have to do with anything? The excitement of the sport of basketball. My paper will be about my favorite sport to watch and play I will also mention about my favorite sport to participate in ancillary. Afterward, I will relate my favorite sport to Michael Mandelbaum’s The Meaning of Sports and offer my opinion on the book.
Sports of old were merely competitive activities rooted in heroism and romanticism. Sports activities today, however, have no such innocence or simplicity. Currently in America, the activities that make up our sports culture is not only the competitive events themselves but the processes and issues that underlie and surround them. Entwined in our sports culture is the giant business of mass broadcasting. Indeed, sports and the media go hand in hand like peanut butter and jelly, like Mickey and Minnie, Darth Vader and Luke. They are intertwined and depend on each other to continue to grow. Sports media includes television, radio, magazines, newspapers, books, films, and, now, most importantly, social media devices provided by the
Campo- Flores had a great example to depict why competitive cheerleading should be considered a sport. Having an unbiased opinion, especially one like Erykah’s, allows the reader to be more open minded to the topic. The author supported his idea by using many examples. For instance, he had Erykah’s story, Luce’s view on male cheerleading, and an inside look at Cheer Athletics competitive team. Having multiple examples makes the author reliable and will allow the reader to trust the opinions discussed. Also, this style of writing allows the audience to be more diverse. Instead of the article being interesting to cheerleaders, it is now appealing to males, people who might want to try cheerleading, and individuals who are uneducated about the sport. A broad audience is important because the author’s message will spread faster. Like the article, the picture taken has an intended audience and
Are high school sports good for kids? Many people believe that athletic sports are good, but they ignore the fatal flaws of these activities. Youth and high school sports are harmful because athletes often get too caught up in winning and get hurt frequently, physical sports also take away from other extracurricular activities.
The beginning of any thought provoking essay will hook its audience using a form of pathos. “Two of his sons returned home from the battlefield whole and healthy. The third, however, came home suffering multiple seizures a day”-(Rorabacher). The quote generates sympathy within us making us yearn to see a welcoming outcome and leaving the audience hooked. Eli Hager’s article follows a similar route informing us that “The state of Missouri sent Harris to the penitentiary in Boonvilee, 250 miles from his home and baby daughter”-(Hager). Again we sympathize with the loss of a family, but not all of the articles used grievance to hook us. In the “Quiet Alarm” the audience is informed of a vaudeville performer who performed deadly stunts involving hatchets, pins, and guns on himself to generate shockwaves in the audience. From these examples we identify how our emotions lure us into these texts.
I watch or read the news pretty regularly, but I only watch news which has the traits that I value most. The news to me isn’t about being entertained, it is about learning, in an unbiased, clear, and concise way. Other television shows can entertain, but the news should be reserved for information relevant to people’s everyday lives, allowing them to make informed decisions. I feel this way because I don’t like when a news source is pushing a hidden agenda. I look for a fair telling of both sides of the story. I also feel that because I stay relatively busy, I think it is insulting that the news would choose to waste my time with extraneous background information, off topic statements, or articles over 1,000 words. Most importantly though, It needs to be clear, if I can’t understand it, it’s the worst kind of news, no news. I have chosen three articles regarding the Flint Michigan water crisis to evaluate based on my criteria. One from CNN titled, “Water Crisis in Flint, Michigan, Draws Federal Investigation,” written by Greg Botelho, Sarah Jorgenson, & Joseph Netto, which focuses on the investigation but also background into the crisis. The next article I have chosen an article from the New York Times (NYT). This article titled, “As Water Problems Grew, Officials Belittled Complaints From Flint.” From the contributions of writers, Julia Bosman, Monica Davey, & Mitch Smith. I chose this article from other ones, because this article primarily focuses on politics like who
Athletes go through the good times and the bad times throughout their years. It makes you wonder how some of the athletes we see today are so great at what they can accomplish during a game, event, career, and so on. Are the best of the best athletes that everyone knows about or hears about doing some sort of a pedestal? Are they choosing to take them? Or are they encouraged by the people? William Moller effectively uses the rhetorical appeals of pathos to support his argument that, “We, the public, place the best athletes on pedestals, gods on high.”
As a casual reader of the sports section of this newspaper, you come across many articles depicting the triumphs of local athletes. However, very rarely do these articles describe the actual athlete behind the success. Athletes come in all sorts of sizes and shapes. They range from the incredibly talented to the horribly uncoordinated. Some are great teammates while others would rather be a one man team. Certain athletes seek out attention from the people around them while others are modest and stay in the background. The fact of the matter is that there is a wide spectrum of different types of athletes that exist in this world and no two athletes are exactly the same. However, each can be put
After seeing the video Royals Fans Come to Rescue, the watcher is left with a much larger lasting emotional impact than Staff Rescues Puppy Left in Hot Car at Stadium because of the immense use of pathos. The level of emotional appeal were vastly different, one being much greater than the other. In Royals Fans Come to Rescue, the news reporter uses loaded words in many of their phrases to convey emotion. They use the phrase, “Eight-week old puppy trapped in a car, with the windows barely cracked.” In just this one sentence, we can analyze the choice of words that make this news report much more compelling than the other. It uses the young age of the puppy to make the watcher feel remorse, the word “trapped” to make the car seem like a prison,
Rationale: This written task will analyse how audience and purpose affect the structure of texts, as well as demonstrate an awareness of how language and meaning are shaped by culture and context. This task will allow me to expire and take into consideration the writing skills of journalist, Sally Jenkins. In my pastiche, I will be conveying a positive attitude towards college athletes being paid. In her editorials, Sally Jenkins often discusses how sports greatly affects our society. It is to be noted however that some excerpts are fabricated.
Are you a person that loves to play sports, or you live out of town? If you are those people you wouldn't want school to start later. A lot of people play sports and if school started later it would be dark during part of practices. According to the article “should school start later?” it says “that it would be an effect on some sports. It would be dark during part of the practice because some sports start at about 4:00 or maybe around 5:00 and practice goes on for a couple hours so it would start to get dark towards the end. Some kids might be doing practice in the dark and some may want to quit playing because it is to hard to play in the dark.
For my career research paper I have chosen to delve into the world of the sportswriter, and take a closer look at what that occupation may hold for myself. I have chosen to research this form of journalism because I consider myself to be a sports fanatic, and would very much enjoy spending the rest of my working days writing about the conditions in the world of sports. During the last year or so I have taken a period of time everyday to relax and read over sports articles from baseball and football at some of my favorite websites, such as espn.com or nesn.com, or to sit down and watch Sports Center on ESPN. I also seem to have an ability to remember statistics and rosters of players and
Sport differs from other forms of entertainment in that it evokes high levels of emotional attachment (Milner, G.R. & Macdonald, M.A. 2012) For example, currenly in the NRL team The Cronulla Sharks have been involved in a lot of media speculation with the sacking of crucial staff members and several doping scandals undergoing investigation. An eye opening decision for the spectator was the sacking of head coach Shane Flanagan. The fans and spectators of this sport took to Facebook to petition Flanagan and two weeks later was reinstated "I am here now and I am grateful for that. My focus now is on the players, Sunday's game and the season ahead. It has been a tough couple of weeks for so many people. It has been terrible; it has been hard on family, friends and players. I am glad we have been able to sort this out,” said Shane Flanagan, head coach of The Cronulla Sharks during a recent
"If industry is to be successful in dealing with public opinion . . . it must learn the language of the people, it must consider the study of public opinion as important as any phase of its operations. It must recognize that public opinion can be measured, and utilize the increasingly scientific methods developing today for gauging it"(Ross)
For a professional sport broadcast I chose to cover a National Basketball Association (NBA) game of the New Jersey Nets playing in Philadelphia against the Philadelphia 76ers. The game was broadcast on the Yankees Entertainment and Sports (YES) network. This game featured the two teams with the lowest win percentage in their division of the NBA. This broadcast shows that the most popular professional sports still do exemplify the televised sports manhood formula introduced by Michael Messner in his book Taking the Field: Women, Men, and Sports. The main themes Messner gives as his televised sports manhood formula are: white males are the voice of authority, sport is a man's world, men are foregrounded in commercials, women are sexy props