Spyware Essay Reflection

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Spyware Essay Reflection I think my performance on the essay was good, but lacking in various areas. In the second body paragraph, my quote selections was not very strong and the lead-in sounded more like narration instead of an introducion to a quote. My commentary was a restatement of the evidence, which made it the weakest block in the entire essay. However, I do think that my paragraphs stayed on topic, even when the quotes were not as thorough as it could be. My rebuttal only contained one textual evidence, which can be improved, It also lacked some organization when it stated the evidence. I did not used “you” in any part of the essay, which was intentional. I also made sure that I was addressing the audience in a respectful way. I
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