Stewart Pidd Hates English Essay 1

597 Words Feb 5th, 2013 3 Pages
Adam Villa
Dr. Stovall
English 50 section 3862
6 February 2013

Passing the Drama Queen In order to punctuate sentences correctly writers must understand certain rules and concepts. A clause is a word group containing a subject and a verb. The two types of clauses are independent and subordinate. An independent clause contains a subject and a verb and can stand alone as a complete sentence. A subordinate clause contains a subordinate conjunction in addition to a subject. A phrase is a group of words that do not contain both a subject and a verb. Three common sentence errors are the fragment, the comma-splice, and the run-on sentence. A fragment is a clause or subordinate clause punctuated as a sentence. A run-on sentence
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He writes, “I found this sick arrowhead and I will stick it into one of his low-profile tire.” The mistake occurs between the words “arrowhead” and “and.” Pidd has failed to punctuate two independent clauses, “I found this sick arrowhead” and “I will stick it into one of his low-profile tires.” He can fix this error by separating the two independent clauses. To separate the two clauses, he can add a comma after the first independent clause or replace the coordinating conjunction with a semi-colon.
Pidd makes a comma splice error. He writes, “I do have a lot of drama going on, I deserve at least a C!” The mistake occurs between the words “on” and “I.” Pidd has punctuated the two independent clauses, “I do have a lot of drama going on” and “I deserve at least a C” with only a comma. To fix this error Pidd can either separate the clauses or subordinate one of them. He can separate the clauses by adding a coordinating conjunction after the comma or replace the comma with a period or by joining the two independent sentences with a semi-colon. To subordinate one of the clauses, Pidd must add a subordinating conjunction to it.
Pidd’s failure to correctly punctuate sentences is the reason why he does not deserve a passing grade. Instead of complaining about Coach T`s teaching method, Pidd should leave the drama at home and focus when he is at
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