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Strategic Plan Critique Paper

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The following document contains the consolidated feedback that members of Team C provided to each other as the final individual assignments for the strategic plans were completed. This was a useful tool in providing a peer review prior to the final submission of the individual assignment. This task allowed each team member the opportunity to provide recommendations for others to enhance their own papers as well as provide some insight on areas where our own papers could be best finalized.

K.’s Feedback for the Team
Patricia:
The background and executive summary of the paper lay a good foundation for the strategic analysis. I noticed that there were a number of grammatical errors throughout the paper which is to be expected with a …show more content…

Good word flow, but just reword the personal pronoun of I which is not allowed in APA formatting. Good paper with great research!

Suzanne:
The paper was great with a lot of research and the greatest asset of the paper was the way you did the strategy and the way it refer to the certain parts of the internal and external. The grid will help a person be more visual with the factors that are involved with the strategy point and the long-term objectives which will give the paper a visual of the each against each other, and see how they correlate. That was a good point and how you brought it out. The financial could be a bit more descriptive and the short executive summary of yours will almost make me rewrite my part. Also and this is good feedback to read other papers, then it is when we see the mistakes we made. Altogether it is a good paper, few grammatical errors, but from your work before you do excellent writing, research, and proof reading skills. Good paper! The only thing I could complain about the paper is that headers are needed to separate each item you are talking about. That is what I did and I wrote too much in my paper, but separation of the headers for the topics will draw the attention to the reader when they are looking to refer to something, and if a header is there it is easy to follow.

S’s Feedback for the Team
Kebreab
It looks like you have a good start on your paper

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