Stylistic Rewrite : Original Rewrite

Joey is the one with the sandwich obsession. Have you ever heard, “some people live to eat, while others eat to live?” Joey and I live to eat. Joey once said, “The fridge broke, so I had to eat everything.” Joey’s big heart and stomach made him the brother I never

The way Todd worded this post has everyone questioning of Joey passed away, but they just haven't shared the news yet. So far his post appears to be the only one out there that makes it sound like Joey has left this world. The fans of Joey are going crazy on the post questioning how she is doing and saying that they are still praying for Joey Feek every single day.

For the most part, I like to write. I surprise myself sometimes when I read what I have written. Essays don’t seem to be that hard for me and most of the time comes naturally to write. Ever since I was younger, reading and writing were always my strong points in school. Math and science didn’t stand

Joey doesn’t visit Paul’s home anymore after hearing Erik and Arthur. On page 145 of Tangerine, “Joey hasn’t set foot in our in our home since the day he met up with Erik and Arthur. He will probably never set foot in it again. Bur Mom could never understand that. For Joey, our house may as well be covered with canvas and bound by ropes, because it’s filled with poison.” Erik had chosen to make fun of Joey’s brother. This impacted Paul because Joey was his friend at the time. Paul understood that Joey wouldn’t want to come over to the house, and possibly stop being his

People may go through hard times but at the end if you are true friends it doesn’t really matter. Just as Roberta and Twyla at the end of the story somewhat seemed like they had made up and came back the their childhood roots. Lately in my life I have came back to the ones I had strayed from. Early last year I had, had a group of friends I would hang with every weekend. But over the summer a new group had arisen and I had thrown them out. Yet that has came back to bite me due to complications between my usual friends. As I have learned it would have been much smarter to stay on good terms with everyone.

"Joey has done all she set out to do… even right to the very end, and by sheer will-power (and God’s grace), she was still here to to see our baby’s 2nd birthday. Over the last number of weeks her pain had gotten worse and her health had continued to decline rapidly. And not long after Indy’s birthday my wife decided that ‘enough is enough’. She was ready to stop fighting and she told me so. She said the flowers would soon be blooming back in Tennessee. It’s time to go

In the beginning of the movie, when Terry called Joey to his death; Terry didn’t feel right about it. We can tell his conscience was troubled while doing the job because of his later statement“ Joey wasn’t a bad kid” (Terry, On the Waterfront ) As Nolan said in the secret meeting in the church “Deef 'n dumb. Somethin' c'n happen right in front of our noses and we don't see nothin'. You know what I mean. No matter how much we hate the torpedoes we don't rat.” (Nolan, On the WaterFront ), ‘ratting’ the mob out was one the most important unspoken rule around. Breaking it could bring his life danger and some serious consequences. Yet with the right guidance he spoke the truth and freed the town from Friendly's hands and gave the people improved jobs and

While reading this book, you will notice how many characters Joey comes across- and how different they are. In War Horse, we can see numerous people who play a role the development of Joey’s character. These characters are Zoey, who gave Joey courage, Samuel Perkins, who made Joey more persevering , and Albert who gave Joey a motivation to live. These characters had a massive influence on Joey and made him into the admirable character he is now. They provided him with skills that lasted him a lifetime- and kept him alive.

Much LIke phoebe this makes me think how we both realized two different things,i realized that people won't always be there when i need them and phoebe realized that nobody's perfect

By the end of the story, Zach begins to change from guilty to apologetic and upset. In this part of the book, Joey got to play one game for the all-star team because one of the players couldn't go. Zach said,“ I just wish you were going with me. It’s like a force-out. I hate that only one of us could make it”(282). Zach is clearly upset, as shown when he says,” I hate that only one of us could make it”(282). He says “ I hate”, which clearly shows he is unhappy with the outcome. He also said “ I just wish”, which shows he wants a different outcome because he feels bad for

First off, every time there has been a death in Sugarloaf no one knows where Joey was at the time of the deaths. In the case of his fathers death no one was around so Joey could’ve spooked Shieka, which caused her to step on Teds head killing him. Then as his mom was searching for him in the woods during the night something jumped out of the woods and knocked her over the edge of the cliff. In the case of the campers’ death he had ran off because he was frustrated but showed up later on. And lastly as Bill Sikes the caretaker was looking for Joey after he had ran off, Bill was brutally killed, his head barely attached to his head like he was a prisoner being executed. ☺ Even the next morning Joey woke up in bloodstained clothes which further gives the illusion that he could be the killer since he is never around when the murders happen. “Everywhere dark stains covered his clothes. Bloodstains. Still wet, still sticky (Saul 224). This quote clearly shows that for some reason the morning the Bill Sikes was killed that Joey had wet bloodstains on his clothes but had no idea where they had come from since at the time Joey did not know that Bill had been killed. It’s like Joey has an alter ego and when he slips into that other reality he no longer can remember what he is doing or has any control over his actions. Its like Joey is a mad dog. ☺ Where he

As the school years flew by, Tyler and I remained strong friends, in addition to the other strong friendships we had built within our friend group. At this point in time, it is surprising if we don’t talk every day, as we have several classes

He knew he had to flee so, he did. Joey and his wife didn’t know what to do and they had nobody to ask for advice. So Joey fled to Italy where he would be least expected. He also knew he had to change his lifestyle to. Joey wore different clothes, talk different and did everything different. Life was different for Joey now and he met new people and was starting to like it. Joey laid low for 10 years but, people were still searching for him. After finding out this news he returned to England in attempt to be a different, new and better person. Joey succeeded and nobody noticed himself or his wife as a Joey and Martha. Now after returning unnoticed Joey decided to settle back in his own town

Joey has begun to put blame on mother for the negative circumstance that Joey has gone through as evidenced by Joey stating “I hate that my mom did drugs, I would not be here now.” (J. Sanchez, personal communication, October 31,

That being said, the writers made her exit inexcusable in the way they projected Hope 's character. When Wyatt arrived on the scene, there was instant fire and chemistry between the two of them. Wyatt did not know that Hope was his brother 's "love interest" and Liam and Hope were on the rocks at the time. She also is guilty of chasing him. Wyatt fell hard for her, and he never gave up. There has never been any doubt who Wyatt was in love with. He never made any demands, he was always cool, even when Liam placed himself in the middle of the relationship and demanded "equal time". Liam inserted himself into the equation. She was lost to