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(Topic Sentence) Zoe Kleinman’s BBC article, “Are We Addicted to Technology?” argues using multiple yet pathetic claims that technology is not a real thing, rather a pseudo-science.(Context/Background/Summary of issue of topic) She wonders whether technology can cause addiction, yet uses poor means to explain so.(What is the First Claim Presented (#1 Tiredness) Dr Ramlakham asserts) The author explains that she believes that the tiredness caused by what Dr. Ramlakham believes is technology-addiction is really the effects of a busy life.(What evidence is Provided to support this claim?) Doctor Ramlakham quickly shoots down her poorly researched beliefs by retorting, “Another recent patient was a 17-year old who suffered a seizure… he was
In Zoe Kleinman's health article, “Are We Addicted to Technology,” the author effortlessly argues that technology has become an addicting pattern in our everyday lives. Kleinman interviews Dr Ramlakhan who works at Nightingale Hospital. Dr Ramlakhan informs that tiredness is nothing more than just a by-product of a busy modern life.
In the article “Are We Addicted to Technology” by Zoe Kleinman makes us really think, are we addicted? It's hard to say considering the author uses claims poorly. Her first claim was “Surely tiredness is a by-product of a busy modern life - children, work, hobbies etc - rather than relaxing time spent watching Netflix in bed?” To most people this comes out to be sarcastic which makes readers not want to trust her. Then she states that a lot of her parents have a hard time sleeping at night when on electronics, even though she had just recommended “watching Netflix in bed” She also interviewed Dr. Ramlakhan which could of been a lot better because all she told us were stories about patents in front of screens and a boy having a seizure by playing
Additionally, social media has the negative effect of addiction. This is presented in the article, “Technology’s Negative Impact on Teens”, by Ashley M. when she writes, “California has enforced a law to prohibit using cell phones while driving due to the numerous amount of accidents.” Teens who drive are so addicted to social media that they can’t even put down their phones. Actually, the reason the law was made was because there were too many accidents occurring from texting and driving. If teens were not so obsessed over social media, they wouldn’t be distracted while driving. Furthermore, in the same source, it accounts, “Even in school, teens are texting during class, distracting them from the teacher’s lecture.” Adolescents who text or
The average teenager spends 31.5 hours to 112 hours per week on their screen. The family in “The Veldt” lives in a smart home called a “HappyLife Home” with many machines and tech. One room can simulate anything the kids imagine. When the parents decided to turn off all the machines because the kids were too addicted, the kids killed them. In “The Veldt” Ray Bradbury believes technology is destructive and addictive.
(Answer Prompt) In this article, “Are we Addicted to Technology”, by the author, Zoe Kleinman, issues the problem of technology. Today, the common issue in today's society is that people slowly become more reliant on their device rather than spending more time in their daily modern life. People are spending more time doing nothing productive with the use of technology, but stays in front the screen and have that gratification and that love of control that they are becoming more unable to stay away from the screen. (1st claim) It slowly affects people mentally and physically,(evidence) Zoe stated “ Surely tiredness is a by-product of a busy modern life- children, work, hobbies etc -rather than that relaxing time spent watching Netflix in bed?.”(effectiveness)Despite
Today I think people, especially teens, are on their phone way too much. When I walk down the street, all I see is the top of people’s heads. The things that really stand out to me are how we overuse our technology to the point where people are being distracted when they drive and how people are becoming lazy and passive learners. While some might say we should not limit how much we use our cell phones, I think we would be better off limiting our time and usage on our phones.
Topic Sentence In the article “ Are We Addicted to Technology?” author Zoe Kleinman discusses the perils of technology addiction. Strictly argues that people are really addicted to technology. Describes some feeling you might feel when you used your device to frequently.
Over the years technology has become more advanced and it has become a big part of our everyday life. Technology has played some big roles in education, medicine, agriculture, communication,safety, and the economy.While technology has become a big part of our life it has caused some bad side effects in jobs, communication, education, agriculture, and safety.
There have been many studies done on the negative psychological and sociological effects of technology while some may be true technology has its share of positive effects on society. The advances of technology have aided in the access to information from relatively anywhere. According to Hepburn (2013) “By the end of 2014, the number of Internet users was expected to be almost 3 billion, two-thirds of whom live in the developing world, and the number of mobile broadband subscriptions was expected to reach 2.3 billion globally” (as cited in Yáñez, Okada, & Palau2015, p.89). It has become easier to stay connected to family, friends, access personal information, and has improved educational opportunities. Technology is always evolving and changing for the better. “Mobile technologies and networks are increasingly expanding in their sophistication and capacity, and new applications (software programs) are enhancing the ways in which individuals interact” (Giota, 2014).
Also stated in the essay to strengthen his argument is “ If you’re like the typical owner, you’ll be pulling your phone out and using it some 80 times a day, according to data Apple collects” to enlighten that even Apple agrees smartphones can be addictive. Another statistic stated by Carr to strengthen his position on how smartphones affect our minds is as stated “A second experiment conducted by the researchers produced similar results, while also revealing that the more heavily students relied on their phones in their everyday lives, the greater the cognitive penalty they suffered.” Carr also constructs evidence by incorporating
Topic Sentence “Are we addicted to technology?” the author Zoe Kleinman discusses how much we as a society rely on social media and technology in general. Technology is slowly but surely taking over our lives. First claim presented (tiredness/exhaustion) kleinman introduces ramlakhan Kleinman introduces Dr.Ramlakhan, A sleep and energy expert. Ramlakhan states that tiredness surely is product of a busy modern life and that this client is running on survival energy. What evidence is provided to support this claim “The thing my patients have in common is the fact that they are in front of screens all the time.”(line 8) Whether it be for work or for pleasure. Is She effective? Dr.Ramlakhan is effective, after taking her advice her patients felt
Dr. Lary Rosen the writer of this article is a psychiatrist and for 30+ he studied the “Psychology of technology” and says that he always has a strong positive towards the impact of technology in our culture and all of his writings would consist of how we can make the most of the marvellous inventions. He said that from the start of the internet to the rapid rise of the world wide web, smartphones, laptops and tablets we already have the world at our fingertips whenever and wherever we want.
Are we too dependent on computers? The answer is yes! In today’s society, people use computers in business, education, and in the entertainment world. Almost everything we do and every aspect of our life is affected by modern technology with computers at the top of the list. People obsess over computers. The computers do everything for us so we don’t have to use our brains anymore. People are losing their jobs due to the computers moving into the workplace. They are making society dumber by the day. Society today is too dependent on computers because we use them for everything, we don’t have the social interaction that we once had, and technology makes us lazy.
If you were to ask somebody what a computer was sixty years ago they would look at you look at you puzzled. Now days it is hard to find a household or office in America that does not contain at least one personal computer. With all of this information at our finger tips, we have to ask ourselves if we are becoming too dependent on technology. Imagine if we were to wake up tomorrow with all electronic devices disabled. Everybody’s life would be impacted in one way or another. We would lose what has become the largest portal for communication. We would also lose countless information that has
Regina Fleck has an iPhone 7 and she admits, “I no longer feel frustrated or impatient. That emotion now manifests in me as a desire to check my e-mail." (Tran). All around the world, technology has taken over the lives of many, especially children. Each year younger children are being introduced to new technology to help them learn and grow, but the effects of this may be different from what is expected. Rather than seeing growth, the overuse of technology is leading to many issues, including a decline in creativity, less active lifestyles, and difficulty falling asleep. The growing overdependence on and overuse of technology is affecting young children both mentally and physically.