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Summary Of Buckley's Response To Argument

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It’s my pleasure to be your partner and write this letter to have a review for your essay. I wish I could give you some useful advice that help you review and revise the essay.
After reading your essay, the thesis of the article might be a divergence and disagree of Buckley’s idea, which is people should complaint their dissatisfied experience. Your thesis stated that Buckley’s idea has lack of persuasion, which it is solely based on the specific anecdote that could support his view, and the counter-anecdotes would be very easy to find. You also used quotes to show how Buckley defined the idea of other people in the theater by using “bystander effect” and tried to politicize a trivial situation using grandiose statements out of nowhere. At the end of the essay, you did a reasonable analysis for the visiting of the leader of Soviet Union. I do agree with your opinion that every silence and no complaints has the meaning of its existence. At the same time, your thesis is also arguable. Even though Buckley’s quotes and his solutions are not efficacy at now, it is still excusable under …show more content…

However, I may not find a clear, conclusive summary part to connect with the opening. I was still enjoying the quote and analysis for the leader of the Soviet Union visited United States, and the article just suddenly ended with no symptom. Besides, the cited work might be a little informal, which you should add the author’s name and the paragraph mark after the quotation marks as well. In my opinion, your thesis is really strong and I like it more than the original one by Buckley. Every quote was showed at the most needed place and gave the most suitable example to support your thesis. The quotes perfectly answered the “why” and “so what”. They were also successfully become part of the

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