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Taleah Keny On Oddness

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Not everything is as it seems. But what if it is? I?ve always been the odd one out in vegas. I?m the nerdy, annoying,brash white guy from north dakota who is out of his element there because of my time here, and out of it here because I wasn?t born here. Don?t worry I plan to move back and claim my birthright, getting a job and being a regular loser in a place with less people than here. Comment by Taleah Kenney: This stands out as the "thesis" for your paper, but then gets no "defense" in your paper. While I?m the odd one out, I?m the odd one out in 1.5 languages. I speak a little german and a big english vocabulary. Those people take kindly to me using words bigger than my name,7 letters, will often respond in spanish to punish me, only to confused as all hades when I yell at them in german. In some ways it can be trouble. It can start arguments because others overthink everything I say, instead of just trusting that I am not doing it because I think I?m better than anyone, but because I was encouraged to do so from a …show more content…

I?m always watching to see if everything is running smoothly and even irritate my parents with nosy-ness. But it is for good reason and makes up a great part of who I am. If I wasn't taking care of everyone I could or at least checking up on them, I start popping my joints and fidgeting. While I do that already, I do it more obsessively. But I do not just demonstrate this in fidgeting, however, but also in groups. I linger towards the back, keeping everyone close by. I can even irritate my friends by doing it when I don?t even realize. Comment by Taleah Kenney: How does this paragraph tie into your culture? You have to make the connection explicit for anyone who doesn't see/understand it. Comment by Tristen Jongeling Hamm: I said it made up a great part of who I am. Is there a way to communicate this more strongly? Comment by Taleah Kenney: Explain how, specifically, it effects who you are. Your actions,

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