Terminology Vs English

In my observation essay, I excelled in several aspects of the writing process. When it comes to using precise words, I feel that I am able to do so quite easily. In addition, I used a good amount of figurative language to more vividly describe the setting, in this essay specifically. I hope I can continue to do this in my future essays because it adds more character and detail to the essay. I also feel that I excel in my ability to effectively express my ideas within

Without the use of description an essay, poem or story would be considered as uninteresting and boring. The use of expressive language is a descriptive element used in this essay. The language applied allows the reader to see exactly what the writer is saying. The writer deliberately chose words that paint a picture and are vividly expressive. “Description should aim for accuracy and fairness and avoid

I wrote with a lot of excessive phrases that were unnecessary which is something I struggled with in this essay. I had a tight grip on the theme and idea of the essay, which was my strong point for this essay. The theme wasn’t something I was genuinely passionate about, but I was able to easily convey passion in my essay through my ability to fully grasp the topic. Through both of my first two essays, I had slight trouble formatting in MLA which I tried my best doing.

This is a personal narrative that I wrote for my CSU application, and this piece helped me get accepted into Colorado State University. I wrote this piece completely outside of class during the first semester of my senior year. I didn’t take this to a teacher conference, but this is a piece that I am very proud of because I feel like the writing represents my person voice and not a character. However I had trouble figuring out how to put my thoughts into words, but I worked through the confusion and now my word choice flows very nicely.

In doing so, I reflected on why exactly I wanted to go into health care. I am choosing to become a doctor because I want to be able to help. As a stated in my memoir, my mother had a stroke and just like Meredith Grey in Grey’s Anatomy, I want to be able to help my mom. Looking back now, I feel that I was very successful in explaining exactly how I was influenced by Grey’s Anatomy. I also feel that I was unsuccessful with MLA format. Reviewing my essay now, I have found multiple mistakes that with a little bit more reviewing before turning it in, I would have

As I apply, I have no doubt that the University of Connecticut School of Medicine is a respectable medical school that can prepare me for my future professional career in medicine by providing endless opportunities throughout my medical education. My interest in this institution rests in its commitment of preparing its students for their medical career through innovative medical education. On a more personal level, the unlikeness of the medical curriculum of the University of Connecticut School of Medicine, M delta, compared to the curriculums of other medical schools I explored had a certain appealed to my understanding of what an interesting way of learning medicine is.

Everyone has their own style of writing. Many differ drastically, while others are extremely similar. Although my own writing could use numerous improvements, which I‘ve set as goals for this class, there are a few things that I’m partial to.

I learned that outlining is very important before writing down your essay. Due to word limit constraints, I will not be able to express myself

This essay is about many things that I have to put in 1,000 words. What I’ll be writing first is my learning style which is do I learn better with a visual or listening. The next paragraph is about brain dominance which is left brain and right brain I’ve taken test to so that I know if I am more right or left brained. Later you will read about my three Everest goals which are separated into my MYP learner profile goal, academic goal, and my behavior goal. Then you’ll read about my color personality which by far was the most fun test that I took because the color result that I had was actually my favorite color. After that paragraph the next paragraph is about me as a global citizen.

The Concept essay exposed my weakness and made me contemplate which of my skills I could potentially improve. In the future, I will keep in mind that I should strive to perfect my style of word choice, sentence structure, and phrasing; additionally, I will remember to take my reader’s perspective into consideration, as just because a sentence makes sense to me does not mean it will be comprehensible to others with different background knowledge. In the same way, incorporating a natural and acceptable number of transition words will be a goal of

Considering my essay and rubric there are some strengths and weaknesses. In my essay, i felt like the setting of my story was good as well as the body of the essay. What i mean by this is by my choice of words, variety of verbs, format, and how easy it is to read. The overall quality of my writing in my opinion was the best part. I feel like the details I used really gave my paper character. Details such as how I used to write on a lot of the things I owned, how in the sixth and seventh grade I wrote an 18 page paper on a Cinderella story, and how I loved to write. Where I struggled with writing this essay would be consistency with point of view and and the five senses. A peer of mine noticed I had accidentally used the word “you” a few

Descriptive writing helps paints a picture of the feelings the topic flames up in the author. It also reveals the importance of using words expressively and giving them profound worth. Selecting specific details is a descriptive writing pattern that was used in the essay. The writer looked beyond the obvious for specific characteristics and expanded on those details, which allowed the reader to “see” it too, as stated in section

One of my writing strengths is descriptive sentences. This will allow the reader to have a clear understanding of what the subject is.

I. Purpose: Use the sample essay to show how great descriptive writing pattern to express one’s thought.

Some of my strengths as a writer is that I excel as writing descriptive essays. One of my favorite writers is Stephen King. Mr. King really likes to write very descriptive scenes (most of time they are bloody and disgusting), but his descriptive scenes are usually very good. This is why I try to use a