The Impact of Federalism on Accountability and Funding of Healthcare in Australia

3947 Words Nov 5th, 2012 16 Pages
Leon SCOTT, B117, Unit 1 Major
PSM UNIT 1: MANAGING UP: THE FRAMEWORK OF PUBLIC SECTOR MANAGEMENT
MAJOR ASSIGNMENT – ASSESSMENT RESPONSE SHEET FOR ESSAY

Participants – complete your details and submit with your major assignment. Your assessor will provide feedback and your grade on this sheet.
Participant to complete

Participant’s name:

Leon Scott

State/Territory: Qld

Participant’s email:

leon_scott@health.qld.gov.au

Date of submission:

02/09/2012

Assessor to complete

Assessor’s name:

Max Halupka

Mark: 88 /100

Essay on Federalism OR Accountability

Leon,

This is an excellent assignment, one that you should be very proud of.

Starting with an impressive introduction, you outline
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