Thesis Statement (What is the most important conflict?): _The most important conflict in “A Long Walk to Water” is mMan vs. sSelf because Salva is battling his own fight mentally. Most people close to him had either died or their whereabouts were unknown, but the strength of his family and friends screamed for him to carry on making him what he is today. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ II. Body Paragraph 1 (Reason 1): A. Topic Sentence (Introduce R1; use transitions) In the beginning Salva had already lost his …show more content…
Commentary: Means: This means even after all these traumatic events both Salva’s Uncle and friend soul’s flow through him, and made him overall a stronger person. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Matters: If Salva didn’t go through these hardships he wouldn’t be the same person today. For example if he still hanged on those memories of grief he would have stop walking, because the path he walked was cluttered with thorns and needles. By also surviving the event with Nile River, Salva’s shown that he’s become a strong person and that he wants to live. ____________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ D. Body Paragraph 1 Concluding Sentence: After all these horrid events he’s triumph over both mental and physical strain, which made him a confident and strong person that does good to the
Salva shows bravely In A Long Walk to Water, when he crosses the river while the rebels were shooting. Before Salva jumps in the river he had to think about if this was the only way. He starts to second guess his decision, but soon he makes up his mind and jumps in the river and starts to swim. In the book it states, “The soldiers started shooting into the river….. Salva had no choice he jumps into the river and begins to swim.” (Chapter 13, Page 78) This quote shows an example of survival because he has to make a do or die decision to cross the river while the rebels were shooting and deadly crocodiles were swimming. Salva didn't have to cross the river he could have took a different and longer trail, but he decides to cross the river putting his life at risk. That's a way of showing bravery.
Sadly, a group of nuer that was against the Dinka had killed salva's uncle."They buried uncle in a hole about two feet deep, a hole that has already been made by some kind of animal."(64) Not only did Salva loose Marial but he also lost the only family member that was close to him. Salva couldnt hold on to this forver. This was the best they couldve done for his uncle, bury him. There was no way that his unc couldve cam back to life so Salva had to get over this tragic event to keep going. Even though he was in shock, he kept on traveling the next day.He couldnt stop moving. He knw that in his heart. It was logical that he continued with the group, othrwise he wouldve been left behind as the group didnt care for him any more since his uncle died. Following his uncle's death, "..the group's attitude toward him changed."(65) they had all thought that he was too small and weak to go along with the group. So as predicted they've started to neglect him again. Even though times were tough, Salva still begged for scraps because it was all he was going to get and he had to accept that. One of Salva's goals was to reunite with his family again.But deep in his mind he always knew that ther was a possiblity that he could never see his family again bcause they couldve ben kileld. But slava nevr chose to accept that reality, instead he looked on the bright said and
To begin with, Salva showed that it was possible for him to survive by perseverance. In the text on page 9, it says "He ran until he could not run anymore." This shows that Salva wanted to survive. He did not want to get caught up in a war and do things
The first reason why Salva is lucky to survive the war in Southern Sudan is because of his uncle. In chapter 4 in Southern Sudan 1985 Salva was alone when he found the old Dinka lady and he heard his uncle’s voice coming. Another piece of evidence that proves that Salva was going with his uncle is “we will take him with us” he said. Then Salva’s uncle never left him because he was a kid and he would not help the group. So he was lucky that his uncle did not leave him. Another part that demonstrates Salva was lucky when he found the old lady because she kept Salva for a few days. A piece of evidence that proves that is ´´Salva stayed in the woman´s barn again that night´´. The quote indicates why Salva was blessed to find his uncle. The old lady was the first reason why Salva was lucky.
To begin with, Salva needs determination. Salva has to be determined in order to make it through the obstacles of the desert, on his journey to Ethiopia. Salva had stubbed his toe so hard that his toe nail came off. Salva came close to giving up, but his uncle kept him determined by giving him goals. ”When they reached the bushes, Uncle pointed out a clump of rocks up ahead, and told Salva to walk as far as the rocks,”(P.54)
Even at the beginning of the book he had to deal with a lost of loved ones. At the beginning of the story, Salva left his school and his family behind in order to survive. Bombs and shooting took place outside his school. He had no chose to leave, in order to survive. When he found group of people, they left him.
A. Quote #1 “His moral force was abased into more than childish weakness. It grovelled helpless on the ground, even while while his intellectual faculties restrained their pristine strength, or had perhaps acquired a morbid energy, which disease only could have given them.” (Hawthorne 125)
A Long Walk to Water is a novel by Linda Sue Park. This novel is about Salva, an eleven-year -old Sudanese boy who grows up in South Sudan. Later in the novel, he has faced challenges one wouldn’t dream of facing, through a long period of time. He has learned, if one helps other people, those people will then help more people, which will result in more happiness in the world. He is a round character, who changes throughout the novel. Salva is a different person at the end of the book. He has gone from hearing his death journey to fighting for survival to helping transform people’s lives forever.
When war threatened villages in Sudan, so many people were forced to leave their homes and families behind. That's just what Salva had to do one dreadful day while at school. A Long Walk To Water by Linda Sue Park is a story about a young boy named Salva, who lives in Sudan. He had to grow up with war going on around him, and had to walk away from it all. Salva even had to leave his whole family behind in trade for safety. Throughout all his struggles Salva stayed strong and has become what we know as a survivor. All the loss of his loved ones, challenges in the wilderness, and him being able to adapt to new situations are all great examples on why Salva would be considered a survivor.
The most prevalent conflict in the novel is man vs. society. The first example is the Joads being forced off their land in Oklahoma. The corporations are becoming
After reading the novel and accounts of the experiences of the people of Southern Sudan during and after the Second Sudanese Civil War, write an essay that addresses the theme of survival by answering the question: What factors made survival possible for Salva in A Long Walk to Water?
Ruth raised her children as Jewish parents would’ve, even if she wasn’t aware of it. Like other Jewish families, she raised her children to be scholastic standouts. They were kept out of the public school system and kept in certain communities. Ruth was particular about the teachers who taught and disciplined them. She wanted he children to receive the best education.
Salva keeps going even though he was devastated when he lost his friend Marial. Salva explained the loss of his friend as: “A cold fist seemed to grip Salva’s heart”(pg 38). He also kept going even though his uncle was shot dead. His beloved uncle who protected him, guided him, and loved him, was gone. “Now that Salva was without Uncle’s care and protection, the group’s attitude toward him changed”(pg 65). Salva faces traumatic events while crossing the river, he watches people get shot and killed. Later, Salva learned that thousands had died trying to cross the river, either drowned or shot or attacked by crocodiles (pg 79). After crossing the river only a few boys were alive, so Salva led the young boys to shelter. The boys kept walking, and walking till they found a safe
Conflict is present everywhere in our culture today. Whether it is on the streets of a large city, or in a rural farm town, conflict amongst people is present. This is no different than in the book The Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck. In his novel, Steinbeck utilizes conflict to illustrate the domino effect of the decline of the poor.
The second survival factor that made survival possible for Salva was Uncle Jewiir’s advice. Not only was his advice a survival factor, but he himself was a survival factor. While Salva was crossing the desert in chapter 7 he found himself losing hope. But Uncle Jewiir didn’t let that happen. He made sure to stay by Salva’s side when he needed somebody for comfort and he gave advice. According to chapter 7 (page 41), it states that “If it hadn’t been Uncle, Salva might have gone crazy with fear. Uncle spoke to him all morning in a steady, low voice.” This shows us that Salva was afraid of the lions and he needed someone to comfort him. This also shows that without Uncle Jewiir Salva would probably be long gone. It also says in chapter 9 (page 53) that “As if by magic, Uncle was suddenly at his side. “Salva Mawien Dut Ariik!” he said, using Salva’s full name, loud and clear. Salva lifted his head, the sobs interrupted by surprise. “Do you see that group of bushes?” Uncle said, pointing. You need to only walk as far as those bushes. Can you do that, Salva Mawien Dut Ariik?” This shows us that Uncle Jewiir’s advice helped him a lot and what Uncle was trying to imply to Salva was to take a step at a time instead of taking it all in one time. Not only did Uncle Jewiir’s advice help now, but years later too. He was