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The Importance Of Prewriting

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Good morning Angela! First of all, I have to say that I felt so emotional when I read through your prewriting. I agree that sometimes we have to face really strong conflicts between our belief and our life, as in your story. Surely, every mother in this world always want to bring best things to her children’ s life; I know it because I am also a mother. Your mother just didn’t want you to encounter challenges yourself when you was too young. In my opinion, sometimes we have to follow what we think is right since no belief or religion asks their followers to give up their children at all. And you have done a very admiring job that is protecting your son. The fact that you show your mother that your decision is right has caused her to think again

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