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The Patriots Character Analysis

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While there is an intriguing “post-apocalyptic” thriller hidden somewhere within “PATRIOTS,” most of the dramatic tension is lost within its dry and dense text. The first 100 pages are dedicated to explicit detail of how the group stockpiled supplies and what type of gear they needed. The dramatic beats are sparsely thrown in between tactical procedures and equipment description, causing the text to read much more like a survivalist guidebook than a novel.

At times, the pacing of the events tacking place becomes stagnant and detracts from the overall flow of the story. Even during battle scenes, the author seems to be overly concerned with the strategic planning of the attack and most of the events are only depicts through second-hand debriefings, which drains most of the suspense from these events. Furthermore, throughout the first half of the novel, none of the group members ever seems to be in any real danger during these encounters, leaving the series of fights with looters and bandits to become repetitive.

The characters never really develop beyond what is written on the page. While the different backstories of how every one trained in the particular survival field and episodes of how each member of …show more content…

For example, the author spends thirty pages describing Matt and Chase Keane’s backstory and situation, but after page 130, we do not hear anything about them until Matt randomly shows up on page 384. Furthermore, while Matt mentions that both his parents were killed he does not mention anything about the whereabouts of Chase. Another example is when the author introduces a character named EDGAR then spends the entire next chapter explaining how his character perfected the radio intercepts for the militias in Idaho. These breaks in the action make it difficult for the reader to maintain engagement in the events taking

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