Creative Writing: The Recruiting

The forest had gone.... and the Witch looked much younger. Audette opened her eyes and had found herself upon a brow of white lilies. The shape of the shrouded old woman seemed changed. Having turned around, and opened her mantle to the tearing gusts, Meliza revealed to the young lady two streams of shinging blackness and smooth white flesh. Audette stopped in her tracks.

“That’s what I saw,” said Freddy. “It must be Tanks treasure, but I’m afraid the river will move it and it would be lost forever. I’d like to take it back with me, and keep it safe for Tanks. Could you help me?”

"Have I hurt you? You didn’t like it? Sorry. This is the first time I kiss a man myself." The girl said, being ashamed of her words.

It was September 30th 2015 and I was coming off Active Duty Orders working for the Indiana Army National Guard Military Funeral Honors Team. I wasn’t sure what I wanted to do next. When I went to Joint Forces Headquarters to pick up my DD Form 214, I ran into the Sergeant Major that was in charge of Recruiting and Retention for Indiana. I talked to him a little bit and he asked me if I had ever thought about becoming a recruiter. I told him that I have thought about it, but everyone I knew, told me that I couldn’t handle the stress of being a recruiter. Sergeant Major told me that the excuse I gave him should motivate me even more to be a recruiter. I told him that I would sleep on it and call him in the morning. The next morning, I called Sergeant Major and told him that I was ready to accept the challenge and be a RRNCO (Recruiting and Retention Non-Commissioned Officer).

“Sure can, Miz. There’s a bucket by the fire barrel to pull water from the river for us and all the animals. I wouldn’t get any, until we’re plumb clear of town.”

“You mean to tell me, that you carry a lighter with you in case you need to light things on fire?”

“But I do have an idea for getting us saved. We have to make some big piles of firewood on the beach, so that when a plane is passing by we can signal it using the fires,” Spinks said.

“ I don’t really know,” Connor said. You guys should all have some kind of chip that should be in your pocket which gets us back to where the stone is.

"Julie you be quiet now. we don't want you to be caught ok?" addie whispered

Taking a deep breath, Levi closed the door to his personal quarters. A loud sigh escaped his lips as he collapsed on his bed, staring at the ceiling. Although he was known for showing little to no emotion, Levi nearly broke down crying at least three times throughout the day. Levi had dealt with some pretty rough shit in his thirty years of life, but between the starving and constipation, absolutely nothing could have possibly prepared him for the suffering that would be brought to him by the latest Survey Corps Recruits.

“Yeah, I'm sure she'll never lighten up. Not when I'm around.” A grunt came from my throat. “And that a fact my friend.”

Within this novella, the boys had differing opinions that conflicted with each other, such as Chris and Gordie with their issues in family life or with Teddy and Vern about comics and their own likes. The boys tended to argue about life-saving actions such as Gordie saving Teddy from the train just to “... do the right thing” (344). Their arguments stepped further after the boys’ conflict with the older gang where Chris called Teddy a chicken for running away due to the hail, and Vern, due to him running away first, was called a “‘... mind reader’” (431). Eventually, the boys ended up arguing with each other about the fate of the body if they should report it or not. The reasons for the boys breaking apart were copious, yet in the end, there was no contempt amongst them even when they were in need of each other, still “skinning” each other and waiting to see each other at

“ oh yeah that's right. Take the bunnies outside i will be out in a minute i'm going to get my boots on” she said

Also, the interviewer did not ask any questions to determine the interviewee’s behavior, her critical thinking, or how well, if at all, she worked in a team. Overall both, the interviewee and interviewer, would do well to brush-up on their interviewing skills.

the waist. she jumped back and wiggled away. She replied," I will not kiss you