The Sign Of Jonah : A Character Driven Story Of Self Discovery, Healing, And Redemption

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THE SIGN OF JONAH is a character-driven story of self-discovery, healing, and redemption. The story feels as if it’s based or inspired by true events. The story tells the struggle of one man’s ability to overcome his depression and his journey to finding God. There are solid themes about faith, second changes, and redemption that drive the plot. The goal is more emotionally driven versus externally driven. The stakes are emotional and psychological. It’s Bob’s mental health that is most at stake. The story also showcases how his depression alienates him from his family. The tone is dramatic with a faith-based pitch. While the message is well appreciated, the script would benefit from further development. The main concern about the script is the structure and the character of Bob, as well as the dialogue. The story is mainly told in a flashback as the protagonist, Bob, tells a doctor about his struggle with depression. The structure spans many years. The concern about the structure is that it feels fragmented or disjointed. The series of events don’t always flow well together, there are rough transitions from one event in his life to another, and the emotional goal isn’t always clear. For example, the story opens with an action, war sequence. It’s an opening that doesn’t feel fully connected to the overall plot. The sequence makes this feel like a story about the military, while it’s really a story about overcoming depression. It might be best to open with a

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